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DanGambino
>> #125769
Posted on 2016-09-17 03:23:01
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The spelling and grammar are just enough off to be really noticeable, in my opinion. Other than that, not bad.
Pinkanator
>> #125770
Posted on 2016-09-17 03:29:16
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I respect this man.
Zelinko
>> #125841
Posted on 2016-09-17 14:52:44
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This is pretty awful both in manip AND the text.

Take the time to fucking spell and grammar check.
SomeCallMeSalty
>> #125857
Posted on 2016-09-17 19:06:04
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Zelinko said:
This is pretty awful both in manip AND the text.

Take the time to fucking spell and grammar check.


Ignore this jackass, it's not nearly as bad as he says. There are noticeable grammatical errors though.
Taryh
>> #125934
Posted on 2016-09-18 02:59:05
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No, the grammar is actually really quite terrible. The whole thing could do with a rewrite.
johnsmith
>> #125947
Posted on 2016-09-18 03:52:08
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Yeah, way too many english mistakes. Maybe run it by a native speaker or two before you post?
mixibnorh
>> #126102
Posted on 2016-09-18 22:57:19
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where are those mistakes?
I tried to look, but really, I found next to nothing.
if it's this bad, do I repost a corrected version?
EDIT: ''coorected", really?
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