Posted on 2016-10-31 17:50:34
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And the next three pictures. Please read my comment on Page 1 in regards of posting my translation on other sites.

We are almost at the end now. After these 3, we have 5 more pages , so the manga will be finished in 2 more days.

Posted on 2016-10-31 22:44:05
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ATTACK HER WEAK SPOT

FOR MASSIVE AROUSAL

[Giant Enemy Boner]

Posted on 2016-11-01 00:36:33
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I think I love you.

Posted on 2016-11-01 00:37:33
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I second this.

Posted on 2016-11-01 01:19:08
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I have to give one criticism, HME. Contractions. Use them. Always. No average English speaker, especially not a young person, would talk like "You are awake." They'll pretty much always say "you're."

Posted on 2016-11-01 10:48:54
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Yeah I probably lack the slang side of the english language, because I always say "I am" "You are" and so on when I talk. I did a couple of more fitting translations for a couple of them, but it is probably still like that for most of them.

Looking at the japanese text, they do use a couple of things evolving around a dialect, but to be fair, my ability for translation isn't good enough yet to evolve that into a fitting english sentence. I will be more careful with contractions in my future translations though.

Posted on 2016-11-01 20:12:19
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The dialect thing sounds like something that would come through.practice, so keep up the good work.

I also imagine a little bit of research would help as well. I'd think Tenchi Muyo would be a good case study, but tbh I think any excuse to dive into some Tenchi Muyo is a good one. ^w^