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busshock
>> #139967
Posted on 2016-11-25 00:24:37
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Drew in the eye-stalk myself since it fit so perfectly, hopefully it doesn't look too terrible.
Zelinko
>> #140001
Posted on 2016-11-25 06:51:37
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You have the outline being too heavy. Compare it to the outlining on everything else.

This along with the Kaa Eyes (WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP DOING THIS?!) are really obvious signs of the shop.

Could be worse but could be better.
HypnoMangaEditor
>> #140054
Posted on 2016-11-25 13:10:05
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In addition, good Kaa-eyes aren't perfect circles either. Most people do them like that, but the slight imperfection when doing them (or going quartercircle instead of full circle) makes them stand out more.
Kalyrian
>> #140059
Posted on 2016-11-25 14:25:00
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Zelinko said:
This along with the Kaa Eyes (WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP DOING THIS?!) are really obvious signs of the shop.


While it does look a bit jarring, it could have been a lot worse. The lines on the eye tentacle were a bit too thick, too, and the veins don't look quite as fluid as they do in the original picture. Overall 8/10, would fap to.

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