Posted on 2016-12-28 10:56:27
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Hey all. Been lurking since old hypnochan days and frequent the site a lot. Occasionally I make a manip here or there, but I was always worried they wouldn't be good enough for the hub. I've been writing a story and happened to write what I consider to be a passable hypnosis sequence, and also happened to find a suiting picture for the scene.

I scanned over and over for typos and grammatical errors, and tried to put a good color on the text and make it easy to follow. Hopefully the post is okay, if not feel free to report it or what not. I also tried to tag it accordingly and did my best to find the artist.

Hope you get some enjoyment out of it and have a good day/evening/night.

Posted on 2016-12-28 11:02:39
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It's a good story. The last few paragraphs are a bit difficult to read, especially where the text overlaps with the darker part of her hair - but I think I should blame my crap monitor for that.

Posted on 2016-12-28 13:40:34
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It's a wonderful piece and very well written, if you don't mind me asking is there a link to the whole thing? It's just id like to read more is all :)

Posted on 2016-12-28 13:48:53
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No link, sorry. I write kinda' frequently but feel like my stuff isn't good enough to post. The story this is from isn't even hypnosis related except for the part this is modified from. Maybe if enough people wanted to read my work I'd post it somewhere, but honestly I worry about just letting people down. If you're still interested in it despite the lack of hypnosis I suppose I could put it up somewhere and link you it, but it isn't finished or anything.

Posted on 2016-12-28 20:39:58
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That is fine then I understand the fear you describe, no worries. Though I'd still be interested, but I don't wish to be a burden so no need to go out of your way or comfort zone for if

Posted on 2016-12-29 05:56:58
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Please post the whole thing somewhere!

Posted on 2016-12-29 07:26:48
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Brilliant, I love your writing and hope to see more.

Posted on 2016-12-29 11:40:41
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I guess it's not fair for me to mention that this section was from a story I was writing and then withhold said story from people who were interested. I could've just easily said I'd created this story to match the caption. Since people seem to actually have at least some genuine interest in my writing and I said I'd share my work if this was the case, I've uploaded the story this is modified from. I've found a site without a upload delay and posted the "chapters" there. Some will be shorter than others - the site forced me to upload in chapters, so I simply took the scene transition or timing breaks from the piece I'm working on and turned them into the chapters.

The link is as follows: www.booksie.com/491455-gloves

Feel free to give criticisms or talk about the work. It can only improve my writing, and if I'm posting it I may as well take the opportunity to get better, no?

Posted on 2021-10-03 09:47:05
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Transcript:
Her eyes locked with his, and he found himself lost in her gaze. He noticed that they were glowing faintly, but he didn't care. They were just too beautiful to look away from.

"That's right. Just let me take care of you. After all, you're so sleepy and feel so comfortable with me that it only makes sense to forget about any worries you have and submit to me completely, right?"

He nodded lazíly. She was right - he definitely trusted her, and he did feel sleepy suddenly.

"Just keep looking into my eyes, falling deeper and deeper, getting lost in their soft glow. Letting your thoughts be pushed aside by my words, letting my words become your thoughts. My words and eyes are all that matter right now. My words and eyes. That's all that matters."

His eyes started to feel heavy, but he couldn't sleep - he had to focus on her words and eyes. That's what his thoughts told him, at least.

"You want to submit to me, to become mine completely.' He wanted to submit to her, to become hers completely.

"You want to abandon all other responsibilities and live with me, loving me and working for me. He wanted to abandon all other responsibilities and live with her, loving and working for her.

"Any feelings of love for me are suddenly much, much stronger Than before. This is completely natural since you feel like you've found your soul mate, and you feel so happy when you're near me.' His already strong feelings of love for her were suddenly much, much stronger than before. It was completely natural since he felt like he'd found his soul mate, and he was so happy when he was near her.

"If you're happy with the feelings and thoughts you're experiencing, you'll ask me to take good care of you when you awake from this trance. When he awoke from this trance, he was going to ask her to take good care of him.

"On the count of three, you'll feel refreshed and awake. Three, two, one... awake."

He blinked a few times before realizing the situation he was in with his soul mate so close to him. "Uhm... excuse me, miss?"

"What is it?" She happily asked.

"Please... take good care of me..." He said with a blush and a smile.

She smiled back, taking him in her arms and giving him a kiss. "Of course. I was worried you'd never ask."