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Hawkeye
>> #151618
Posted on 2017-01-20 17:52:40
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I haven't gotten any comments recently, so I'm wondering how exactly people are liking where the story's going?

JimLogan54
>> #151625
Posted on 2017-01-20 18:28:15
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I enjoy it.

Whisper
>> #151627
Posted on 2017-01-20 18:28:57
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Hawkeye said:
I haven't gotten any comments recently, so I'm wondering how exactly people are liking where the story's going?


Probably too busy fapping

51spitfire
>> #151628
Posted on 2017-01-20 18:31:04
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I love it :D

rain
>> #151631
Posted on 2017-01-20 18:46:43
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I'm enjoying it! And am glad to see a bit of successful resistance for some reason ><

Though, there is a "wan't" instead of a "want" in this one at one point, but dunno if it's worth the bother fixing at this point.

Hawkeye
>> #151632
Posted on 2017-01-20 18:54:08
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rain said:
Though, there is a "wan't" instead of a "want" in this one at one point, but dunno if it's worth the bother fixing at this point.


Are you certain? I just word-searched the entire master text document and that search came up empty. So unless Sebastian typed this in by hand (doubtful, he said he'd rather make it as painless as possible since English isn't his first language), I don't know how that could have happened. Can you point to it?

Whisper
>> #151633
Posted on 2017-01-20 19:17:34
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We can clearly tell you have something for Loss of power, resisting, memory loss and turned tables.
That's the way you like things and you are doing a good job at making it work

Hawkeye
>> #151634
Posted on 2017-01-20 19:21:32
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Whisper said:
We can clearly tell you have something for Loss of power, resisting, memory loss and turned tables.
That's the way you like things and you are doing a good job at making it work


Thanks, glad to hear you're liking it! The fact that I had stopped getting comments had me a tiny bit worried that the story had gotten boring all of a sudden, which would have been quite the depressing achievement since that was right when Camilla got her tits out.

Whisper
>> #151635
Posted on 2017-01-20 19:27:17
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To be perfectly honest the content of text might be a bit too long, and while you made a dutiful effort of cutting it in pages, it still seems a little lengthy to my taste.
Moreover I personally am more enclined with happy end stories.
Yet your writing qualities are solid and I therefore enjoy reading your stuff when it comes out~

Hawkeye
>> #151637
Posted on 2017-01-20 19:34:17
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Whisper said:
To be perfectly honest the content of text might be a bit too long, and while you made a dutiful effort of cutting it in pages, it still seems a little lengthy to my taste.
Moreover I personally am more enclined with happy end stories.
Yet your writing qualities are solid and I therefore enjoy reading your stuff when it comes out~



Ah. Wait, happy end stories? Can you define what a happy ending means in the world of hypnotic enslavement?

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