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  • Id: 44365
  • Posted: 2017-01-22 16:08:39
    by inkrypted
  • Size: 2550x3240
  • Rating: Safe
  • Score: 52 (vote up)
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Changer
>> #152110
Posted on 2017-01-22 16:20:28
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For setting up a flashback, it's better to allude to the events, then cut into the flashback, rather than say exactly what happens. By saying exactly what happens first, you spoil the plot before it has a chance to happen.
Systemfailure99
>> #152123
Posted on 2017-01-22 18:07:52
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Fixed the tags to how they should be on both~
CartoonHero
>> #152147
Posted on 2017-01-22 21:16:53
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even with the arrows, I had troubles with reading it XD
Pastel-Daemon
>> #152148
Posted on 2017-01-22 21:20:30
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CartoonHero said:
even with the arrows, I had troubles with reading it XD


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^ Site rules, might wanna change that.
Salamander
>> #152165
Posted on 2017-01-22 22:52:12
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I love this comic, but the panel flow is horrible.
RedCollarBlackCollar
>> #152171
Posted on 2017-01-22 23:29:09
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Salamander said:
I love this comic, but the panel flow is horrible.


That, and the dialogue, especially at the end. Cripes it just sounds so unnatural.
Salamander
>> #152191
Posted on 2017-01-23 01:25:43
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
That, and the dialogue, especially at the end. Cripes it just sounds so unnatural.


Agreed, But seeing princess bubblegum content makes me overlook all its flaws
Apple
>> #152216
Posted on 2017-01-23 02:44:43
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The art is nice, but... that grammar, that lack of punctuation...

I'm sorry, but it needs to be pointed out.
sanicthehedgehog
>> #153264
Posted on 2017-01-29 18:33:47
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Me need more Marceline femdom
FlawlessVictory
>> #229424
Posted on 2018-01-23 21:20:52
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sanicthehedgehog said:
Me need more Marceline femdom


Damn, you got so horny that you forgot English XD
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