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  • Id: 48422
  • Posted: 2017-05-05 11:48:25
    by Bipp
  • Size: 1386x1002
  • Source: muryuuin tayun
  • Rating: Explicit
  • Score: 83 (vote up)
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Bipp
>> #172925
Posted on 2017-05-05 11:50:40
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during my ... "break" I made some more hypnohub stuff and some, like this one, is one that I forgot about, and have no idea if I needed to redo it or not so.... hope you enjoy, and I'll be posting seven or more pics over the next few days.
hypnoslave1095
>> #173008
Posted on 2017-05-06 03:42:02
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A bit of constructive criticism, the text here is a bit too ambiguous as to exactly what the criminal did that made the officer freak out at the start. As the text goes on it becomes more clear, but there was a bit where it was a tad confusing as to what exactly had happened.
Rua
>> #173096
Posted on 2017-05-06 15:30:11
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STOP RIGHT THERE CRIMINAL SCUM
TheMessenger
>> #173270
Posted on 2017-05-07 07:54:01
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Three year sentence for stealing steak?
Bipp
>> #173330
Posted on 2017-05-07 11:32:10
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TheMessenger said:
Three year sentence for stealing steak?


They were some pretty good steaks man. I suggest you buy some from the market up town
persondeathman
>> #174574
Posted on 2017-05-12 09:52:25
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Another bit of constructive criticism; you should break text into more paragraphs, and huge sentences down into multiple sentences. After they say "...input commands" I would use a semicolon and list off the commands. I would use a colon if the sentence was not a complete thought, like "Commands: ..." That being said, I liked this one a lot so keep up the good work!
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