Taryh said: I'm sure I've seen this concept before in a different picture.
I wouldn't be surprised because isn't an innovative concept at all just an idea that went through my head when i saw that picture.. but i'd love to see that other pic to save it for my collection xD.
IDPet said: I wouldn't be surprised because isn't an innovative concept at all just an idea that went through my head when i saw that picture.. but i'd love to see that other pic to save it for my collection xD.
I mean I'm sure I've seen this exact concept before, where they get sleepy or mindless whenever they try to remove the mind control device. It's bugging me now because I can't find it. Fairly certain it was an image caption, at least.
She woke up. It was a sunny morning, but she was still half asleep. She sat on the bed and licked her hands, smearing them in her own saliva. Suddenly, she realized what she was doing, and tried to cry out; she couldn't.
She wasn't in her bed, and was completely naked*. [italic]Where is my...?[/italic] Her thought trailed off. She couldn't remember what she was supposed to be wearing. She tried again. [italic]Where are my...? What do you call them? Rags?[/italic] It was at this point that she felt a strange object on her crown**. [italic]A cat-ear band? [/italic] she guessed. It was! With horror, she noticed a matching tail***. [italic]Wait, it's not real...[/italic] she thought, even though she realized she couldn't touch it. It felt like she really had a tail, but it was clear the appendage wasn't real.
With terror mounting, she tried to remove the headband. It was no use. Every time she tried to remove it her hands grew heavy and she relaxed, helplessly releasing the band and leaving it nestled on top of her head. Finally resigned to her fate, she began to investigate the room she was trapped in. A variety of useless junk littered the space, dotted with toys that she couldn't help but fixate on****.
[italic]Keep it together. You have to try to remember where you are,[/italic] She thought.
A calendar nearby marked the date. If it was correct, a whole week of her life was missing. She struggled to remember, but the memories were cloudy. She remembered flashes through a deep haze: walking around on all fours, the shadow of another person directing her, playing with a toy mouse. These memories overwhelmed her.
[italic]Okay. Okay. Calm down.[/italic]
It was at this point, that she realized that she didn't remember her own name. She struggled to remember. "Sar... Lar... Kitty?"
******Another voice responded from just outside the decorated room. "That's right, Kitty." A stranger opened the door and entered the room. It was him! The man from her visions! She was visibly upset by his presence, until he took out a cat toy and began to bounce it's tail in his fingers. Up and down... Up and down... Up and down... Her eyes were locked onto it and she couldn't look away. Without thinking, she raised her wrists into little begging paws and tried to grab the toy with them.
[italic]I remember. Whenever he uses that, I...[/italic] Her eyes became glassy as her thoughts faded away.
She woke up a few moments later. "Do you want to play, Kitty?" The stranger asked. She answered with a mischievous look and a "Meow! Purrrr...." She rubbed against her owner's legs while he talked.
"This room is always a mess," he sighed. "I really need to get a 'litter box,' Or maybe I should follow your advice and 'ask your sister for a maid.'******** I can't believe that this is how you're spending your vacation. Ever since I told you I could hypnotize you, you've spent every waking hour in a trance; and I still don't understand why you wanted to think I had kidnapped you to turn you into a cat. The things I do for my girlfriend."
"Meow!"
"Oh, I'm not complaining."
^In English prose, it's customary to start a new line with dialog, regardless of internal or external. In addition, thoughts and internal monologue is remarked with italics. *Webster says that naked carries a helpless connotation **more descriptive than head. *** Add detail. E.G.; "snaking from her bum" whatever. **** Sub "be distracted by" ****** Is this correct? I mean, I guess. ******** This doesn't make sense. Some sort of idiom that doesn't translate well?
Taryh said: I mean I'm sure I've seen this exact concept before, where they get sleepy or mindless whenever they try to remove the mind control device. It's bugging me now because I can't find it. Fairly certain it was an image caption, at least.
Ooopps, She's remembering *Dispatches the memory cleaners*
Taryh said: I mean I'm sure I've seen this exact concept before, where they get sleepy or mindless whenever they try to remove the mind control device.
Well, in this case isn't a mind control device but a "cosplay",About the cat ears thing, I was inspired by this story
(ironically it's also about cat trance lol), but there it was used differently (more as a reward/punishment), in a scene she tries to recover her clothes from the mannequin but always ends up falling to the ground.
@Lyon Thank you, I thought it was well written because some Hub users helped me to fix some grammatical errors.
I'll make a third version when I have time and I'll delete this one,
In English prose, it's customary to start a new line with dialog, regardless of internal or external. In addition, thoughts and internal monologue is remarked with italics.
I'll need to read about this to avoid future mistakes.
Is this correct? I mean, I guess.
(*x6) Well the toy is like a plant called "cats tail" :v.
This doesn't make sense. Some sort of idiom that doesn't translate well?
I'm not sure if you're referring to this scene but... (*x7) he was hinting to hypnotize his girlfriend's sister to take care of her in cat mode as a maid for stuff like cleaning the room or preparing her meal.
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I'm sure I've seen this concept before in a different picture.
I wouldn't be surprised because isn't an innovative concept at all just an idea that went through my head when i saw that picture.. but i'd love to see that other pic to save it for my collection xD.
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I wouldn't be surprised because isn't an innovative concept at all just an idea that went through my head when i saw that picture.. but i'd love to see that other pic to save it for my collection xD.
I mean I'm sure I've seen this exact concept before, where they get sleepy or mindless whenever they try to remove the mind control device. It's bugging me now because I can't find it. Fairly certain it was an image caption, at least.
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She woke up. It was a sunny morning, but she was still half asleep. She sat on the bed and licked her hands, smearing them in her own saliva. Suddenly, she realized what she was doing, and tried to cry out; she couldn't.
She wasn't in her bed, and was completely naked*. [italic]Where is my...?[/italic] Her thought trailed off. She couldn't remember what she was supposed to be wearing. She tried again. [italic]Where are my...? What do you call them? Rags?[/italic] It was at this point that she felt a strange object on her crown**. [italic]A cat-ear band?
[/italic] she guessed. It was! With horror, she noticed a matching tail***. [italic]Wait, it's not real...[/italic] she thought, even though she realized she couldn't touch it. It felt like she really had a tail, but it was clear the appendage wasn't real.
With terror mounting, she tried to remove the headband. It was no use. Every time she tried to remove it her hands grew heavy and she relaxed, helplessly releasing the band and leaving it nestled on top of her head. Finally resigned to her fate, she began to investigate the room she was trapped in. A variety of useless junk littered the space, dotted with toys that she couldn't help but fixate on****.
[italic]Keep it together. You have to try to remember where you are,[/italic] She thought.
A calendar nearby marked the date. If it was correct, a whole week of her life was missing. She struggled to remember, but the memories were cloudy. She remembered flashes through a deep haze: walking around on all fours, the shadow of another person directing her, playing with a toy mouse. These memories overwhelmed her.
[italic]Okay. Okay. Calm down.[/italic]
It was at this point, that she realized that she didn't remember her own name. She struggled to remember.
"Sar... Lar... Kitty?"
******Another voice responded from just outside the decorated room. "That's right, Kitty." A stranger opened the door and entered the room. It was him! The man from her visions! She was visibly upset by his presence, until he took out a cat toy and began to bounce it's tail in his fingers. Up and down... Up and down... Up and down... Her eyes were locked onto it and she couldn't look away. Without thinking, she raised her wrists into little begging paws and tried to grab the toy with them.
[italic]I remember. Whenever he uses that, I...[/italic] Her eyes became glassy as her thoughts faded away.
She woke up a few moments later. "Do you want to play, Kitty?" The stranger asked. She answered with a mischievous look and a "Meow! Purrrr...." She rubbed against her owner's legs while he talked.
"This room is always a mess," he sighed. "I really need to get a 'litter box,' Or maybe I should follow your advice and 'ask your sister for a maid.'******** I can't believe that this is how you're spending your vacation. Ever since I told you I could hypnotize you, you've spent every waking hour in a trance; and I still don't understand why you wanted to think I had kidnapped you to turn you into a cat. The things I do for my girlfriend."
"Meow!"
"Oh, I'm not complaining."
^In English prose, it's customary to start a new line with dialog, regardless of internal or external. In addition, thoughts and internal monologue is remarked with italics.
*Webster says that naked carries a helpless connotation
**more descriptive than head.
*** Add detail. E.G.; "snaking from her bum" whatever.
**** Sub "be distracted by"
****** Is this correct? I mean, I guess.
******** This doesn't make sense. Some sort of idiom that doesn't translate well?
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I mean I'm sure I've seen this exact concept before, where they get sleepy or mindless whenever they try to remove the mind control device. It's bugging me now because I can't find it. Fairly certain it was an image caption, at least.
Ooopps, She's remembering *Dispatches the memory cleaners*
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I mean I'm sure I've seen this exact concept before, where they get sleepy or mindless whenever they try to remove the mind control device.
Well, in this case isn't a mind control device but a "cosplay",About the cat ears thing, I was inspired by this story
curia-dd.deviantart.com/art/Teacher-Surprise-Part-3-Conclusion-401120791
(ironically it's also about cat trance lol), but there it was used differently (more as a reward/punishment), in a scene she tries to recover her clothes from the mannequin but always ends up falling to the ground.
@Lyon
Thank you, I thought it was well written because some Hub users helped me to fix some grammatical errors.
I'll make a third version when I have time and I'll delete this one,
I'll need to read about this to avoid future mistakes.
(*x6) Well the toy is like a plant called "cats tail" :v.
This doesn't make sense. Some sort of idiom that doesn't translate well?
I'm not sure if you're referring to this scene but...
(*x7) he was hinting to hypnotize his girlfriend's sister to take care of her in cat mode as a maid for stuff like cleaning the room or preparing her meal.
Thanks again, I appreciate it.