Posted on 2017-06-01 05:16:19
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Lord help me I'm back on my bullshit. Anyway Any and All criticisim is appricated and accepted.

Posted on 2017-06-01 05:29:23
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The wound is on the wrong arm for it to be too soon, so I have no objections.

Posted on 2017-06-01 05:30:05
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The font and colour are well chosen, and go well with the picture. I could easily "hear" it in her voice. The trigger word worked well in all caps there, too.

There's an issue with the grammar and a typo. Then = time, than = comparison. The first "of" should be "on", ... Small things really that a proof-reader can catch for you.

The implied blood-licking is not my fetish, but it might be someone else's on the site :)

Posted on 2017-06-01 05:37:07
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Something something, too many arms.

Posted on 2017-06-01 05:39:36
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*insert me slicing off an arm*

Posted on 2017-06-01 05:40:59
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Now when did I say this took place post season 3?

Posted on 2017-06-01 08:09:03
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not anymore pink, she got a replacement.

Posted on 2017-06-01 10:54:28
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I love it!

Posted on 2017-06-01 14:50:59
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Needs more Yang femdom

Posted on 2017-06-01 18:36:11
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mhmmm thick thighs save lives my friends.


maybe not the blood per say, but for me there is something intimate about nursing someone.