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UselessFish
>> #187449
Posted on 2017-07-12 20:34:07
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Heh.

Posted on 2017-07-12 20:35:22
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Idk if it's just me, but the panel layouts really... All over the place :/

Imasuky
>> #187453
Posted on 2017-07-12 20:36:11
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
Idk if it's just me, but the panel layouts really... All over the place :/


Yeah it took me like 3 reads to figure it out.

Other than that I like this a lot but it's super hard to read.

UselessFish
>> #187454
Posted on 2017-07-12 20:40:32
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Imasuky said:
RedCollarBlackCollar said:
Idk if it's just me, but the panel layouts really... All over the place :/

Yeah it took me like 3 reads to figure it out.

Other than that I like this a lot but it's super hard to read.

Yep.

liquidhobo
>> #187464
Posted on 2017-07-12 21:46:35
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...wut?

RedCollarBlackCollar said:
Idk if it's just me, but the panel layouts really... All over the place :/


It's not just you. I can see how they were going for some creative paneling but it just makes it hard to follow.

Sleepyhead97
>> #187467
Posted on 2017-07-12 22:03:19
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What's with the flag? The picture looks fine.

supersmasher2020
>> #187468
Posted on 2017-07-12 22:05:55
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Sleepyhead97 said:
What's with the flag? The picture looks fine.


If one of the previous commenters was the flagger, then I'm going to guess it's because of the panel layout.

Nikolai.exe
>> #187471
Posted on 2017-07-12 22:41:44
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cloning <3

KimeraUltimate
>> #187486
Posted on 2017-07-13 00:51:25
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Sleepyhead97 said:
What's with the flag? The picture looks fine.


Yeah the panel layout is very messy. I cant tell how to read it :/

The art is great, its just the way the panels are organized. Please tell me what process goes through your mind then when reading this for the first time sleepyhead97

rocketracer294
>> #187516
Posted on 2017-07-13 03:37:37
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1: I need to know more of this. What happen next?
2: I'm pretty sure transforming girls into bicycles is right up sleepyhead's alley.

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