blush bottomless breasts caption caption_only cleavage collar empty_eyes female_only femsub grima180_(manipper) happy_trance kusanagi_tonbo large_breasts manip red_hair see-through short_hair shower text thighhighs wet wet_clothes

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Grima180
>> #191029
Posted on 2017-08-02 08:31:20
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Sorry this took a bit, due to the overwhelmingly positive response the last one got, I decided to take things a lot slower than I normally do. This is roughly the third draft of this one. I think there is gonna be one more of these at least, maybe more. If you guys are up for it, try to tell me exactly what you do or don't like about these either in the comments or PMs. That would be the most useful feedback possible for me and help me keep improving. Thanks!

AriothVulpe
>> #191032
Posted on 2017-08-02 08:45:03
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These are fantastic! I always love "programming" stories and trances, and I found this very enjoyable to read. Well written, with no major issues with spelling or grammar; fits well with the source image; I'm quite happy to see these and will be happy to see more. Thank you!

Anon_3.141
>> #191036
Posted on 2017-08-02 09:03:33
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Wasn't her right eye blue before?

Grima180
>> #191039
Posted on 2017-08-02 09:45:23
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Anon_3.141 said:
Wasn't her right eye blue before?


That was her avatar.

ghost13
>> #191047
Posted on 2017-08-02 11:25:46
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Is that the girl from Big Order?

Naesala
>> #191055
Posted on 2017-08-02 12:48:34
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Fantastically written!

reese339
>> #191059
Posted on 2017-08-02 14:44:19
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All im hopping is it stay with a happy femsub with this "Caretaker" becoming a maledom of sorts.

Spectre
>> #191061
Posted on 2017-08-02 15:17:02
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Nice take on "machine learning" xD

Penguinpervert
>> #191130
Posted on 2017-08-02 23:46:39
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reese339 said:
All im hopping is it stay with a happy femsub with this "Caretaker" becoming a maledom of sorts.


But the Caretaker is female given how she gave her a bra and underware from her own clothes.

ptWolv022
>> #191158
Posted on 2017-08-03 03:25:47
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"took a long, cold shower"
Well, at least she's not taking advantage of Program Chromia.

PS: I like these two pics because it has someone being reprogrammed. Humans getting treated as nothing but a machine is always interesting, if somewhat terrifying a concept. Plus, I like how this picture didn't have Chromia immediately be put to work as a Flesh Droid. She's being treated as a human, at least for now. Interesting to see a follow that shows what actually happens to her (whether they try and fail to fix her, or just make her a human-bot).

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