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- Id: 53623
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Posted: 2017-08-29 08:22:03
by Kekkama - Size: 4000x2200
- Source: www.hentai-foundry.com/pi...imeFlux/344057/Just-Taste
- Rating: Explicit
- Score: 247 (vote up)
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>> #196062
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>> #196066
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First manip. Tips and pointers appreciated.
Maybe choose some different color combinations. Looking at the light green on top of the white background was hurting my eyes toward the end. If you plan on taking the criticisms from this and updating the manip I would suggest reversing the color of the beastkin text and the background, as it would still be readable while also solving the above problem. Additionally, while I'm personally fine with it, some might consider the length of the text to be too long. Other than those, this is actually better quality than a lot of other manips on the hub. Welcome and please enjoy your stay.
>> #196074
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You even managed to work in a plot.
>> #196075
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Maybe choose some different color combinations. Looking at the light green on top of the white background was hurting my eyes toward the end. If you plan on taking the criticisms from this and updating the manip I would suggest reversing the color of the beastkin text and the background, as it would still be readable while also solving the above problem. Additionally, while I'm personally fine with it, some might consider the length of the text to be too long. Other than those, this is actually better quality than a lot of other manips on the hub. Welcome and please enjoy your stay.
Alright thanks. I'll change the background at some point. As for the length, I suppose some streamlining of the text could be done. This was mostly a proof-of-concept for me as a first upload. Thank you for the help. I'm not really accustom to being limited on my wordcount. Perhaps I'll stumble upon an image pool that I like so I can strech the text over eight or more images, that way I can get a real story in there.
>> #196077
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Seriously, nice work.
You even managed to work in a plot.
Thank you for the compliment.
>> #196078
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>> #196080
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If it's this good, I have no issue with the text being long.
Hear! Hear!
>> #196082
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If it's this good, I have no issue with the text being long.
Same, I thought it was a very good length. I don't think you should ever try to limit your word count, so if you think something should be include it then by all means do, there's lots of potential here and I think you could do more stuff as awesome as this. Best of luck, and I look forward to more!
As for the text colors, I agree that bright in bright colors can look a little painful sometimes, but it's not that bad here and I've certainly seen a lot worse, so it's really good for a first upload.
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