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- Id: 61389
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Posted: 2018-03-03 21:45:49
by Egglepurt - Size: 640x640
- Source: www.pixiv.net/member_illu...um&illust_id=66330657
- Rating: Questionable
- Score: 132 (vote up)
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well uh, couldya try and make the text bigger...? Cuz right now with the size and the color, it's REALLY hard to read.
What they said. The image is far too small. But aside from that, the grammar is (Mostly.) fine.
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This is more of a nitpick, but I'd suggest making and spacing paragraphs. Makes it so much easier to follow. At least for me, but Im fuckin' weird sooooo *shrugs*