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JoshDehu
>> #306877
Posted on 2019-03-02 22:48:20
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Ok, welp here's my first attempt at a written manip in a long time. I don't consider myself to be a good writer, but I thought I'd give it another shot, because they're fun to make. Any feedback or criticism is welcome.
Lloyd
>> #306878
Posted on 2019-03-02 22:54:59
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I'm tagging this with humor and SCOWLING at whoever didn't
ghost13
>> #306885
Posted on 2019-03-02 23:42:25
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JoshDehu said:
Ok, welp here's my first attempt at a written manip in a long time. I don't consider myself to be a good writer, but I thought I'd give it another shot, because they're fun to make. Any feedback or criticism is welcome.


I loved the two parts of it the most:

The part where she gives a long intellectual and philosophical speech about why she willing chooses to be enslaved... then admits that it's also cause this is turning her on.

And this exchange:
"Ok... are you a philosophy major?"

"Yeah, why do you ask?"

"No reason."

Also, any chance of a sequel?
JoshDehu
>> #306887
Posted on 2019-03-02 23:45:31
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ghost13 said:
I loved the two parts of it the most:

The part where she gives a long intellectual and philosophical speech about why she willing chooses to be enslaved... then admits that it's also cause this is turning her on.

And this exchange:
"Ok... are you a philosophy major?"

"Yeah, why do you ask?"

"No reason."

Also, any chance of a sequel?


Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you like it.

And I might do a sequel, depends on if I have the inspiration/time.
ghost13
>> #306888
Posted on 2019-03-02 23:47:18
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JoshDehu said:
Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you like it.

And I might do a sequel, depends on if I have the inspiration/time.


fair enough
Nobody67
>> #307018
Posted on 2019-03-03 22:27:28
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I am loving this. Please do more!
MonsieurChuchote
>> #307453
Posted on 2019-03-06 05:57:57
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It's pretty hard to whiff on consensual mind control in my book. Ghost's feedback might be more helpful, but willing, smart girls push a lot of my buttons. So put me on the tally for people clamoring for a sequel!
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