Posted on 2019-04-02 07:16:28
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Glad to see Iowa's a good sport. Although a ship riding a boat is the very definition of "redundant".

Posted on 2019-04-02 08:11:37
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I just have to say I love every one of these that you are doing :)

Posted on 2019-04-02 10:38:46
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Could there possibly be a tag made for second in commands in harems. I'm really getting into this

Posted on 2019-04-02 10:59:04
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The power dynamic is all fucked. I get what you're trying to go for, but if I was in the POVs shoes, I wouldn't have trusted a word she said.

Posted on 2019-04-02 22:09:46
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Oh, the power dynamic is clear. She is in control.
And I don't think trust is an issue here. She can make you into her pupil. A loyal servant and thrall against his will.The reason I think our Pov sub accepted this offer is a combination of, wanting to become more powerful, fearing her and thinking she could do it anyway, her explaining her reasoning to him and good ol' fashioned thinking with the wrong head

Posted on 2019-04-02 22:49:08
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The Iowa one you started on - could be the one where the Student Surpasses the Teacher!

Posted on 2019-04-03 20:01:57
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Actually, my plan was for there to be a “backstory” where Iowa surpassed her own teacher.