Posted on 2019-04-21 10:23:31
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...
Time for that guy.
This next part won't have a manip, but instead will be told here. Mostly because there's no good "Dadsuki jumps off a cliff and dies art" for me to twist with some hypno.
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Her father, having heard the moans, started up the stairs.
Natsuki scrambled to hide Yuri in her closet. She barely succeeded by the time he came in.
(In bright pink text)
"The hell is going on up here?" He growled drunkenly.
"Nothing you'd care about." Natsuki replied innocently, while attempting to access the mind control software with her Father

It wasn't working. He didn't have a file to control. He was about as real as her "classmates".

"Don't lie to me." He growled. "I know your damn moan. All I used to hear before I threw that fucking garbage porn out. Why can't you be a real woman and watch normal shit?" He took a sip from his bottle. "Who else is up here?"

Natsuki gulped, she needed help, NOW! But who could help her? It wasn't like Anon or Monika were here, and Yuri was still a mind controlled mess, she certainly couldn't save her.

(In sudden, blue text)
"Don't be so certain."
(Green follows)
"I guess... I can't believe we stopped fun over this! You know this is basically a normal Monday for her, right?"
"You're just upset I interrupted!"
"...kinda"
Natsuki looked behind her father, Anon and Monika! They came to her aid!
"You got the code, hun?" Anon asked his girlfriend, who was only wearing her undershirt.
"I guess, let's hurry this up."
(Bright pink returns)
"Who in the he-eeeeeeeeeeeeee" Her father simply continued glitching as Monika opened a code box and erased him...
And her house.
Stuffing them back in the Clubroom.
"I'm grateful, but WHAT THE HELL?! MY STUFF!"
Anon shrugged. "We'll code you in a new house tomorrow, Nat. It was either delete all or nothing. Anyway, you and Yuri go back to having fun. Myself and Monika are going back to the Spaceroom." With that, they disappeared.
"Grrrrrreeeeaaaaat." Natsuki then looked around. "Say, has the Clubroom ALWAYS had a night mode? We should use it more, it looks peaceful."
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This is evolving from standard erotica to full on fanfiction...
Interesting..
Very, very interesting..
Oh well, at least he's dead now!

Posted on 2019-04-21 13:28:58
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(I still think Yuri is just Emo, not Goth)
Nice job man, too bad the blurry effect makes the picture itself hard to see

Posted on 2019-04-21 20:18:57
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I never know how to feel about Natsuki’s dad. From the special poem, it looks like he starts neglectful or forgetful, before becoming abusive. I’m gonna blame Monika on that one. Still, nothing more satisfying than having Part 2 Dadsuki being deleted.

Posted on 2019-04-22 01:03:39
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(Big Tiddy Goth GF is just a meme name for her)
Thanks! Sorry about the effect, maybe if I fiddle around with the settings I'll make a better choice for the next one.



I thought he was always physically abusive in both Acts. 2 was maybe just a little worse.
Monika is probably at fault, but hey it all worked out in the end! Just Monika after all...
And yeah, feels nice to see a dead Dadsuki.



I thank you! I wouldn't call my final line cynical, more proud, after all no one likes him (I wish I could do Italics, anyone know the code?)

As for your last question, if you noticed Monika didn't appear to have much on, she and her boyfriend were being intimate at that moment. He was within the virtual space. He was keeping tabs on them to avoid another another repeat of Monika, and noticed the issue at hand.