Posted on 2019-12-02 07:39:42
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Here's the source for the cell phone image, just in case: www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/63123257

Posted on 2019-12-02 08:04:25
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These captions just get better and better! Keep em up :)

Posted on 2019-12-03 02:15:49
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It feels kinda weird to me, the place you out this in I mean. It's the 9th pic of your series yet it doesn't quite feel like it should be the ninth, it's kinda inconsistent, she went from full domme to more gentle to a very dommy girlfriend and then back to a more humiliating'ish kinda way to treat him. It's kinda weird to me.

Posted on 2019-12-03 03:09:49
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Hmm, I think I see what you're saying. In my view it's pretty similar to the previous one, but I'm not as sensitive to harsh language, so I can see how it would feel inconsistent if you are. Maybe think of it as, she knows the reader likes humiliating language a bit, so she uses it even though he's her boyfriend. Anyway I'll take it into account for future ones. Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it :-)

On the subject of where it's placed, I am going to edit the arrangement of all the manips in the pool at some point. (Maybe I will do some text editing for consistency and put them in an imgur album too? Dunno yet) Right now I'm just sort of doing them in chronological order of when I made them.