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Niyebe
>> #348257
Posted on 2019-12-17 08:35:13
Score: 1 (vote Up)
Dialogue is really good as always Ghost. No typos from what I’ve seen. Only problem is just a personal one, not one from your end
Disastermaster55
>> #348279
Posted on 2019-12-17 18:13:10
Score: 1 (vote Up)
I have 1 nitpick, using caps as the "drone speak" makes it kinda seem like she's yelling.
DeepDarkandEmpty
>> #348282
Posted on 2019-12-17 18:57:18
Score: 1 (vote Up)
Disastermaster55 said:
I have 1 nitpick, using caps as the "drone speak" makes it kinda seem like she's yelling.


Yes, but I find that a plus rather than a minus.
Monotone yelling shows dedication to the job.
pokemongirl
>> #348324
Posted on 2019-12-18 04:41:39
Score: 1 (vote Up)
Gardenia year please~~~~
ghost13
>> #348419
Posted on 2019-12-19 04:50:23
Score: 2 (vote Up)
Niyebe said:
Dialogue is really good as always Ghost. No typos from what I’ve seen. Only problem is just a personal one, not one from your end


Really? No typos? That's awesome! I'm glad you like it.

Disastermaster55 said:
I have 1 nitpick, using caps as the "drone speak" makes it kinda seem like she's yelling.


True, but I also find it the easiest to implement. Italics causes people to think they're using a trigger...

DeepDarkandEmpty said:
Yes, but I find that a plus rather than a minus.
Monotone yelling shows dedication to the job.


INDEED.
Jeffb
>> #348602
Posted on 2019-12-20 12:14:40
Score: 1 (vote Up)
Wait, so, who's the dom?

>> #348603
Posted on 2019-12-20 12:20:39
Score: 1 (vote Up)
Jeffb said:
Wait, so, who's the dom?


Yes.
Adudewithaplan
>> #461292
Posted on 2022-03-09 20:41:03
Score: 1 (vote Up)
I wish he'd just use the alt version, because she looks already hypnotized in that one rule34.paheal.net/post/view/4591805
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