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Eodez
>> #365319
Posted on 2020-04-20 16:42:03
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Source?

ghost13
>> #365343
Posted on 2020-04-20 21:59:18
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Caption looks like it could use a rewrite...

Entity?


>> #365361
Posted on 2020-04-21 00:04:01
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also tags

Sombra
>> #365363
Posted on 2020-04-21 00:06:54
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you wouldn't be too disturbed by me if i would just quickly.... BORROW YOUR DICK WOULD YOU?

Variable_X
>> #365414
Posted on 2020-04-21 03:49:53
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ghost13 said:
Caption looks like it could use a rewrite...

Entity?


"Wich"

Girlyvader
>> #365434
Posted on 2020-04-21 05:46:10
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This honestly reads like it's been put through machine translation; the word choices seem off for a simple case of poor grammar.

mixt
>> #365506
Posted on 2020-04-21 21:39:25
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Girlyvader said:
This honestly reads like it's been put through machine translation; the word choices seem off for a simple case of poor grammar.


Yeah, concept is nice. Actual wording is meh, but nothing so bad as to take me out of it.

ghost13
>> #365524
Posted on 2020-04-21 22:18:54
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mixt said:
Yeah, concept is nice. Actual wording is meh, but nothing so bad as to take me out of it.


Agreed.

Schuhsuppe
>> #365968
Posted on 2020-04-24 12:39:38
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oh fuck my grammar. Sould someone be so kind to tell me where exactly issues have been made?

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