Posted on 2020-04-25 06:17:46
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I wasn't happy with how dark the last manip was, so I made a new one.
I'm honestly not happy with it either. I had to give the PoV character a defined gender, and I didn't notice the character was Tifa until I was already done.
Pleh. Writing is haaaard.
(Also, now I look at it, the margins are weird.)

Posted on 2020-04-25 06:51:25
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yep nothin suspicious at all thanks for the help ma’am

Posted on 2020-04-25 07:29:55
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Oh, I promise you. After we're done, I'll have helped you so much you won't even feel the need to *think* about how unsuspicious I am in future.
You'll just trust me <3.

Posted on 2020-04-25 09:53:47
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Mmmm i don't how to feel about that. Your writing style is differemt but also quite cool, the story itself is actually well wwritten but I have to say that I don't really know what is up with the setting of these 3 manips. Do people want ro get abducted by a hypnotist? It's always bothered me I have to say.

Posted on 2020-04-25 14:12:12
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And I am happily never seen again. :)

Got to say enjoying your stories very much. Thanks!

Posted on 2020-04-25 14:46:43
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Just wanted to say that I've really been enjoying your manips so far! This one and the moth one have a nice rhythm to them, and this one has really interesting... imagery? Voice? Idk, I don't want to overanalyze, but they're very effective! ;)

Just wanted to drop a compliment, encourage you to keep improving -- and to take a break if you need to! It's incredible to see so many manips in such a short amount of time, but burnout is a problem -- stay healthy, and tysm! :)

Posted on 2020-04-25 15:48:34
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This Tifa is so adorable but so sexy in that blue dress TIFAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Posted on 2020-04-25 15:53:02
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Is this how she got Cloud to join AVALANCHE?

Posted on 2020-04-25 16:37:07
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I like it

Posted on 2020-04-25 16:40:32
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There are few uses for a poetry background, but I suspect that's why the style is 'interesting'. And I'm glad it seems to be working out ^_^.
If people like my manips, there are eleven I posted on hypnopics which I will probably never get around to uploading here. And once again, I will take anything resembling a request. Because it's way easier than thinking of my own ideas.
Thank you again all. And don't worry about burnout, I swing randomly between being incredibly productive and utterly losing focus and doing something unrelated. The concern is very appreciated, though.

Bestial: In universe or out? In universe, I assume people aren't really viewing the world through the lens of 'is this person trying to hypnotise me?'. I know I don't consider that possibility in most conversations. And my victims don't seem to... uh... Anyway!
In real life, I admit the appeal of manips for me is the idea of being fabulously attractive and able to wrap people around my little finger with a few words. So my understanding of my own audience is limited. That said, there do seem to be several people on this very site who do indeed quite like the idea of being abducted by a hypnotist.



Well if that's what happened, there's a *whole* extra dimension to that game.