Posted on 2020-05-02 06:34:05
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This is by far the longest manip I've done, and I legitimately ran into problems with having to increase the resolution so the text was legible. So sorry for the filesize.
It's also the third manip I've done with references to hypnotising someone to be *smarter*. I don't think there is a tag for this?
If you want to complain about practical problems with this idea, please note that the hypnotist is a witch.
And seriously, why would anyone want to make their subs stupid? What, are people afraid they won't be able to keep control of them if they're not completely brainless?
Psh.
Smart subjects are more fun, can do more for you, and can understand what you're doing to them. A helpless pet is so much more enjoyable when they *know* they're helpless, and still can't do anything about it.

Posted on 2020-05-02 06:40:48
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Jeez, that’s a lot of text. Great work as always, but that might be the longest work in the hub.

Posted on 2020-05-02 06:49:52
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I am legitimately not sure how it got this long :/. It just kinda... did.
Sorry :(.

(I do think it's kinda appropriate that a manip about making someone smarter should be extra wordy. That's it. It's an artistic statement. Totally.)

Posted on 2020-05-02 07:03:10
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Great as always with these.

Posted on 2020-05-02 07:21:42
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Well unfortunately, I cant read it at all, even if I zoom in the quality on the words is bad so I cant make it out, so that sucks

Posted on 2020-05-02 07:31:04
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Ah, really? I'm so sorry! The quality is fine on my screen!

Here is a transcript:

Oh my.
Are you seriously trying to give me orders?
Really?
Oh, that’s just adorable.
Listen.
I’m sure your little crown
And your little armies
Are very impressive out there.
But in here
It’s just you and me.
And I don’t think you realise yet
Just how weak that makes you.
I’ll give you one chance
To walk away from this
And keep pretending a fancy title gives you real power.
Otherwise, you’re going to give it all up for me
All your wealth, your lands, your servants
You’re going to leave them all behind
To be my devoted slave.
And you know what?
You’re going to do it willingly.
I won’t trick you,
Or lie to you,
Or bespell you,
Because I don’t need to.
Because you know what the thing about crowns is?
They make everyone submit to you
With no effort whatsoever.
You’ve probably never really had anyone resist you before.
Never had to try
To make people fall to their knees.
Let alone had someone actually try to dominate you.
And that’s left you so soft.
So weak.
You won’t be able to resist
Because you’ve never had to.
And if you don’t take my kind offer, and leave now
I will make you mine.

And yet, you’re still here.
Even though you know what’s going to happen.
Maybe you want to submit to me?
Maybe you’re just a little curious
About what it might be like
To let someone else take control?
And if you’re going to submit
It might as well be to someone who looks like me,
Right?
Or maybe you’re tired.
Tired of making the decisions.
Of all the stress. All the responsibility.
Of carrying the weight of an entire kingdom on your shoulders.
Who could blame you if you wanted a break?
Just for a few hours.
Or maybe you’re just a natural submissive
Who was unlucky enough to be born royal.
Oh, yes. I think that’s it.
Poor little Majesty
It must have been so hard for you
The smallest glimpse of my cleavage
And you can barely take your eyes off it.
I can’t imagine how you managed in your court
Surrounded by all those beautiful noble ladies
Just longing to submit to them.
To obey them.
To throw yourself at their feet, and give yourself to them.
Utterly.
I bet you couldn’t even admit it to yourself.
Or you would have broken completely.
Like you’re about to right now.
So you had to pretend you were invincible
Unbreakable.
Dominant.
Even when you could barely bring yourself
to say ‘no’ to your own maids.

Oh, but you had to, didn’t you.
You were royalty.
So you always had to be in control.
Even when every instinct was telling you to submit.
But it’s OK now.
Like I said
It’s just you and me in here.
There’s no ‘royalty’ here to hold you back.
Nobody you have to be strong for.
Nobody to judge you for your desires.
So you can just relax.
Nobody will know
If you just give in.
Just for a moment.
Just to see what it’s like.
You can even tell yourself
You’re doing it to prove me wrong.
To prove how strong you are
By resisting my attempts at controlling you.
That’s right.
Your sleepy mind can accept that, can’t it?
At least until you admit that
You love to submit for me.
Don’t worry.
I’m not going to trick you, remember?
There’s no trap here.
You’re not going to find yourself unable to escape.
I’m just giving you the chance to feel
How wonderful submission can be.
See?
It’s fine.
You can leave any time you want.
You’re completely safe here.
Completely able to relax
And let the pleasure of submission flow through you.

You just need to know what it’s like
After all, a wise monarch
Needs to understand all the options
Before coming to a decision.
You’ve never really submitted to anyone before
So you just need a taste of it.
Just need to know what it’s like.
You couldn’t possibly decide not to submit to me
Without to submitting to me first.
Could you?
And it feels so good, doesn’t it?
Your entire body is inundated with pleasure.
Every part of you feels amazing.
You can’t imagine any feeling better than this.
It’s better than food.
Better than wine.
Better than sex
Better than anything.
All that wealth
All that power
You have outside this room
It just brings you more worries,
Doesn’t it?
And nothing you get out of it
Could ever compare to this.
You can still leave
Any time you want.
But why would you want to?
When you can just relax even more for me
Staring mindlessly into my cleavage
As you sink deeper into this pleasure
Everything feeling better and better
With each and every moment.
You don’t need to worry.
Don’t need to make any decisions
Because you know I’m so much smarter than you
And I know so much more than you.
I knew how naturally submissive you were before you did.
Knew you’d submit to me.
Knew how to give you this pleasure.
So there’s no reason for you not to just
Leave everything to me.
Hand me control of your of your body
And your mind.

See?
No tricks.
I don’t need them.
In fact.
Every day, you’ll snap out of this trance.
Every day, your mind and body will return to you
Until you willingly choose to submit to me again.
And you will.
Every day.
Because I’m so wonderful.
Because submitting to me gives you
So much pleasure
Why would you ever want to do anything but
Serve me?

And now that your mind is mine
I’m going to improve it for you.
Isn’t that nice of me?
Say “Thank you, Mistress.”
There’s a good slave.
Now.

Whenever you look at me,
You’ll find your mind getting sharper.
Faster.
Ideas will come to you more easily.
Problems will seem simpler
You’ll be more focused.
More creative.
And you know what?
It won’t matter one bit.
You’ll still end up as my adoring slave.
Every.
Single.
Day.

You know why?
Because I’m so much cleverer than you.
I don’t need you dumb.
I don’t need you weak.
Because even at your absolute strongest
You still want to be my slave.
All being smarter will do
All you’ll want it to do
Is help you work out how to serve me better.

In fact…
Every time I hypnotise you
Your will will get stronger.
Every time I drown your mind in pleasure
It will come out sharper.
And every time you submit to me
The whole world will become clearer to you.
That way, after a few years
Controlling you might almost count as a challenge.

For now, though
You’re going to have to find another way
to keep me occupied.
I’m sure you can think of something
With that fancy new mind of yours.
And I just know you’ll be trying your absolute best.
After all
You do so want to pleasure me
Don’t you, Your Majesty?


(Sadly you lose all the italics this way)

Posted on 2020-05-02 08:15:30
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Crystal clear on my end! If you're viewing it in the site, then yeah, it's always gonna be reduced down; make sure you click "Download larger version" to get one that isn't forced to fit on the website layout, and then click it with your magnifying glass to get it at proper size rather than fit-the-screen size, and you should get it at it's proper ridiculoushuge size.

Posted on 2020-05-02 08:27:30
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Well now you're just rubbing it in :/.

I was worried smaller text would be hard to read!

(Also, photoshop is an arcane art, and I'm kinda happy if whatever I get out of it is reasonably readable)

Posted on 2020-05-02 08:32:21
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kinda making me think there'll be a turning the tables version of this next, like the witch was so confident the young prince would be her slave forever and so willing, but after a while he became more intelligent, and even tricked her more than once to have her hypnotized and making her dumber with every trance she goes through.

Posted on 2020-05-02 08:49:23
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This is great! I approve of this idea! It's *so* much more fun when there's a genuine challenge, after all.

And... less of a fan. To me, making her dumber would just be admitting she's too good for him at her normal intelligence. It's like playing a game on easy mode.

(Also, unrelated, you're a really good writer ^_^)