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Toxic_Thunder
>> #1130
Posted on 2013-09-12 13:03:25
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And with a particularly hot oneesama, that's all.

slaveboy
>> #1146
Posted on 2013-09-12 20:13:10
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What is this, shitty manip awareness day?

Mindwipe
>> #1149
Posted on 2013-09-12 21:20:06
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I haven't taken the time to go through all these manips to see if they meet our quality standards, and don't have the time to right now. Maybe I'll let Vanndril do the moderating this time.

tiechonortheal
>> #1153
Posted on 2013-09-12 23:00:43
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slaveboy said:
What is this, shitty manip awareness day?


I dunno if I'd call it 'shitty', but I was quite surprised to see so many of my early manips from the Collective being dumped in the past day or so.

AC
>> #1184
Posted on 2013-09-13 04:15:56
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slaveboy said:
What is this, shitty manip awareness day?


I wouldn't call it shitty, this isn't even in the bottom 50% of stuff on the collective.

Stem_Cell
>> #1186
Posted on 2013-09-13 04:39:09
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AC said:
I wouldn't call it shitty, this isn't even in the bottom 50% of stuff on the collective.

The bottom 50% of stuff on the collective actually spans about 90% of their stuff.

Mister Vi
>> #1195
Posted on 2013-09-13 13:02:09
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slaveboy said:
What is this, shitty manip awareness day?

Idk I'm enjoying a of of these manips, but then I'm a sucker for most text manips.

Errata
>> #1346
Posted on 2013-09-17 03:45:55
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I really like this one. The conversation is teasing and comfortable. It tells you a little about their relationship without spelling it out with narration. Not only is the fact she's more or less perfectly aware of the situation (i.e. the mind control) radically different from most subs in most manips, her reaction to it is different too. She seems annoyed, but like she expected it, maybe even wanted it a little.

This is pretty well-written, in my opinion. I don't know why this manip is the one that gets the "shitty manip awareness day" comment. Is it because the only thing in the actual picture that's changed is the eyes?

Contorted
>> #11659
Posted on 2014-03-05 16:30:42
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Errata said:
I really like this one. The conversation is teasing and comfortable. It tells you a little about their relationship without spelling it out with narration. Not only is the fact she's more or less perfectly aware of the situation (i.e. the mind control) radically different from most subs in most manips, her reaction to it is different too. She seems annoyed, but like she expected it, maybe even wanted it a little.

This is pretty well-written, in my opinion. I don't know why this manip is the one that gets the "shitty manip awareness day" comment. Is it because the only thing in the actual picture that's changed is the eyes?


Pretty much my thoughts as well. I wouldn't mind seeing more of these kind of situations in manips.

LillyTank
>> #11661
Posted on 2014-03-05 17:21:52
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Contorted said:
Pretty much my thoughts as well. I wouldn't mind seeing more of these kind of situations in manips.


Yeah it's not really "shitty". It could definitely could be done better but it's not the among the worst out there.

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