It's been 4 months, and Steek has disappeared. Should I upload the wip art, and finished story?

Is this thread still being used?

If so, I got some artwork I'd like to share. If not, then oh well.

Well I gave two sets of feedback in past 24 hours so... Technically yes...?

Alright. Awesome.

Well, here's three of my recent drawings. Two of the are characters I drew for D&D, and the third one is a rule 63 of one of the characters that I drew when I decided to practice on drawing the female body, which turned into hypno fetish fuel at the end.

i.imgur.com/Pafk29u.jpg - Drawing 1

i.imgur.com/7rTqIOu.jpg - Drawing 2

i.imgur.com/Bg7F7E2.png - Drawing 3

ANY, and I mean any advise and criticism that'll help me improve is much needed.

Myuk, dude, at this point I'm actually using some of your recent stuff as reference for MY art. You've got almost nothing to worry about. You're easily one of the most popular artists on the site, due partially to your modesty and interaction with the rest of the Hub. If there's anatomy issues you're worried about, believe me I don't see 'em. As for the other things you asked about... You keep your methods of hypnosis rather varied, which is always good, and you don't dip into things groups of people would dislike often, while managing to keep them frequent enough for people who do like them, which is also always good. An example would be futa. It's not everywhere, but it's in enough places so that the people who enjoy it (myself included) are appeased, but the people who dislike it aren't constantly bombarded by it. Your storytelling is on point, by which I mean I've never been more invested in pornography than I am with your stuff, and you know when to put in comedy, action, porn, etc into your scenes. Nothing seems too forced, and even still you've got liberties seeing as anything rushed or forced is generally during scenes of boobs and tentacles and hypnosis, and you've come a long way from your already good artwork when you first started uploading. Your facial expressions are especially good, and it really adds to the characters. I can feel legitimate emotion during a scene where there are tits in my face and tentacles and juices and shit flying all over the damn place. That is impressive. Honestly? I literally have nothing but praise for you dude. You're incredibly talented, and literally one of the most modest people on the Hub to be asking for critiques here amongst the budding and steadily improving artists. Honestly, I can't even say anything negative about the style. Sure, it looks like what you'd expect a manga to, but I seriously can't complain about that. It's a good, solid style, with plenty of room for adjusting and improving, and only if you specifically feel like doing so. It's a style that could evolve into something else, or could stay as it is, and I highly doubt anyone would complain either way. That's pretty much all the critique I can think of, and I'll admit I doubt much of it was helpful, seeing as most of it was... Y'know, compliments and praise, but still, I hope at least some of it helped a bit.

I mean the last one actually aint too bad. The prior two have issues with longer arms/legs, and the 2nd one's head especially is too small/squished.

The pencil lines themselves I can really do without; curious to see if you could try out inking perhaps if possible. But before going to that for more polish, do try some more sketches in advance to show off if you'd like.

Alright. Yeah, Head Proportion has been a long enemy of mine, but I feel I am conquering it, one step at a time.I mainly just do pencil and paper for that's all I really got. Not that tech savvy like most folks here.Though I do have colored pencils, and may experiment on blending some colors as well. As of now, my birthday is going to come up, and I just got my field gear from this past drill weekend from the Marines, so I gotta get all that shit organized first.

But, nevertheless, thanks for the advice, and I'll get to it when as soon as I can.

While a bit pricy, I bought this pen and have been using it for years to ink some of my work. There are lotta other options out there ofc, but one I'd personally recommend if you'd like to push for something nice to use.

For now, I'll stick to pencil. I've not really had good experience with pen before, to be honest.

That's fine then.

Thanks! The arm is actully there but it's at an odd angle so hidden by the dom girl. I really should have moved to make that clearer because I can see it looks like it's missing

Hey guys, I was wondering if I could get a little help with this: sta.sh/06fhfdnqw6p

The idea here is that Patchouli Knowledge is getting smeared/filled with latex goo by the tentacles. It's the beginning of a sequence in which she is corrupted into a latex slave. I mostly like how this part turned out, but I hate how her facial expression and general facial features came out. I wanted her to have a look halfway between arousal and anguish, and I don't think I even came close to that. And for some reason, her face is just generally looking very ugly to me. Any thoughts on how to rectify this?

Facial expressions are something I particularly love doing! My advice would be that a face's expression is especially prominent in the eye area--eyebrows and eyelids especially! If it were me, hmm, I think maybe I'd have her eyes sort of rolled up a little, and her eyebrows at more of an upward angle? :) That might help convey the emotion you're looking for!

Do manipulations count in for advice? If so, here's my latest piece; bit.ly/2dLdQ5b

Eyebrows do a lot of work here. Halfway between arousal and anguish? Look up masochist doujins on any hentai site!
Also keep doing latexy stuff CAUSE IT'S AWESOME!