UnsusualTuna
01/09/23 09:02PM
[Ren'Py] [Game] Lustful Sin 0.0.1

Hi guys! It's me again. I just updated the game! Now the prologue will be extended to be three times as long and there will be a small sandbox mode afterward ( You go around the map and do stuff, it's still very barebone right now.)

unusualfish.itch.io/lustfulsin

With all that said, give it a go if you have some free time, I would really appreciate it if you have some suggestions for me to improve!

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Hello guys, long-time lurker here! So I decided to make a hypnosis game in my free time. It's a Ren'Py visual novel with Koikatsu assets.

- The game literally only has the prologue for now, so it should probably take 10 - 15 minutes at most.

- The game has no sound at the moment in case I need to change the story.

- My writing skill is not that good so expect some cringe while reading the story.
Biofreeze
01/11/23 03:29PM
Hey! Played the intro a day or two ago and I liked it! I'm trying to learn koikatsu to make a game so I really liked the character looks.

It's not really a complaint but maybe during the mind control exaggerate the facial expressions to kind of convey your point that she's under control? Cause outside the eye color change I couldn't tell much but it's more just critique than a gripe! Looking forward to more!
UnsusualTuna
01/12/23 06:48AM
Thanks for your suggestion! I will probably make her eyes glow brighter next time to see how it goes.

Also you should join the Koikatsu discord server, they are very helpful and have tons of resources, overall very friendly community. I will also be looking forward to your game!
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