111 said:
ok I have another lovely story witch I call
Lucy's school

It was a week ago that Lucy learnt that she was special, Zoe was her best friend who wanted take their relationship to the next level but when Lucy took her cloths off, Zoe's body was instantly was filled pleasure and her mind emptyed of any thought that wasn't about Lucy and she began masturbating to Lucy, she no longer wanted to be called Zoe, she now was Slave Zoe forever.
Lucy loved the idea of anyone seeing her naked body becoming her slave but she was too shy to use this ability, so she had Slave Zoe hypnotize her into losing her inhibitions.
Within a week Lucy was now the new student council president of her enslaved school, almost every other day they held a festival but they all ended the same way, she started walking everywere naked always with Slave Zoe also naked on a leash behind her contantly oggling Lucy's ass.
Finally it was time for an international festival after "convincing" camera men, reporters and schools from every country the festival was underway, she knew that she could at the beginning just walk out there naked but it was always the big reveal at the end that made her so wet.

111 said:
ok I have another lovely story witch I call
Lucy's school

It was a week ago that Lucy learnt that she was special, Zoe was her best friend who wanted take their relationship to the next level but when Lucy took her cloths off, Zoe's body was instantly was filled pleasure and her mind emptyed of any thought that wasn't about Lucy and she began masturbating to Lucy, she no longer wanted to be called Zoe, she now was Slave Zoe forever.
Lucy loved the idea of anyone seeing her naked body becoming her slave but she was too shy to use this ability, so she had Slave Zoe hypnotize her into losing her inhibitions.
Within a week Lucy was now the new student council president of her enslaved school, almost every other day they held a festival but they all ended the same way, she started walking everywere naked always with Slave Zoe also naked on a leash behind her contantly oggling Lucy's ass.
Finally it was time for an international festival after "convincing" camera men, reporters and schools from every country the festival was underway, she knew that she could at the beginning just walk out there naked but it was always the big reveal at the end that made her so wet.

Dr_Mabuse said:
All of Janie's friends warned her of being friends with a demon, but Janie always responded: "Just because Rachael's a demon and I'm a angel, that doesn't mean we can't be friends." Janie was always trusting, and often let Rachael talk her into things, the most noticeable being the tattoos. Janie didn't know what they meant, but she liked the way they looked.

Over time, Janie's wings slowly changed colour and her angel friends started to avoid her. After a while, Rachael convinced Janie to drink what humans call an aphrodisiac. As soon as Janie drank it, she felt a feeling that she had never felt before; she soon became addicted to the feeling, always wanting to feel it. So when Rachael offered her special version of it, Janie practically begged for it despite Rachael's warning that it was ten times stronger and permanent.

Rachael placed the aphrodisiac on the ground, Janie jumped for the bottle, and as soon as she finished drinking it, she moaned and had a noticeable wet spot.

Rachael stood above Janie and said, "You look just like so many others. When they drank it they all looked the same, and soon after, they became my mindless drones. But unlike them, you were my first friend, and that truly meant something to me, so I want you to rule them by my side. But until your body gets used to it, I think we'll play. When we get home, maybe I'll get you to wear latex... something real tight."

Not that thorough, I'm sorry to say, but I don't think I left any glaring errors.

Dr_Mabuse said:
Natalie had been watching the spiral on her computer screen for longer than an hour, her pajamas covered in drool. Slowly, words started to fade in, and Natalie couldn't help but blankly repeat them: "Slave. Loyal. Submissive. Obedient. Slave. Loyal. Submissive. Obedient. Slave. Loyal. Submissive. Obedient." It continued until they were all drilled into her, and she continued to repeat them as the screen told her to finger herself. It said: "You will slowly get faster until you cum, and when you do, you will obey master..."

The power had cut out, but Natalie kept fingering herself while she repeated her four words. When she came, she realized she had no master, but she knew that the person who sent her the clip was in her class. She would show everyone how submissive she was, and her master would know.

The next morning, she asked the teacher if she could show the class something. She stood in front of the class, then she lifted her skirt and shirt, showing the bondage gear underneath.

111 said:
this story is a lot like the bet but with corruption and its a lot shorter


Loren layed was on her hands and knees with an extreme amount pleasure radiating from her tail and wings, earlier Loren made a deal with a demon that if she could remain sane during the transformation she could stay a demon and if she couldn't she would be a slave to the pleasure forever, but it was an opportunity that was never going to come up again and she always thought of her self as a strong willed person but the pleasure was uncontrollable, just a touch she thought just one little touch, she slowly touched her tail and her mind melted and she could only stroke it.


I've been having difficulty's writing and with using gimp but I think this was still a good story.

Grim said:
you might mean Lauren instead of Loren, not sure

this one is just corrected grammar, with as few changes to the words as possible


Loren was on her hands and knees with an extreme amount pleasure radiating from her tail and wings. Earlier, Loren had made a deal with a demon that if she could remain sane during the transformation, she could stay a demon, and if she couldn't, she would be a slave to the pleasure forever. It was an opportunity that was never going to come up again, and she always thought of her self as a strong willed person, but the pleasure was uncontrollable. Just a touch, she thought, just one little touch. She slowly touched her tail, and her mind melted; she could only stroke it.


this one also has altered language to summarize and make it shorter, but the story is the same


Loren was on her hands and knees, extreme pleasure radiating from her tail and wings. The deal with the demon was that if she could remain sane during the transformation, she could stay a demon; if she couldn't, she would be a slave to the pleasure forever. It was a once in a lifetime opportunity, and she always thought of her self as a strong willed person... but the pleasure was beyond controllable.
Just a touch, she thought, just one little caress. As she gently touched her tail, her mind melted; she could only stroke it.

111 said:
thank you for giving me altered ones, I'm good at making stories but I'm not good at telling them, so again thank you.

I use a random name generator and it spat out the name Loren.

Grim do you want me to tag your name on it when I use your altered versions.