So, this lil thing I'm working on, hypnohub.net/pool/show/1227 , I have some plans [actually I have a lot of plans] but particularly, I can reveal that part 4 is gonna deal with a hypno mp3 and some walkin' about in public. Can't really talk about the parts after that because spoilers.

Thing is, I have no part 3 right now. There USED to be one, but I'm not so hot on what I had planned now, and it seems a bit too fast to go from 2 to what is still part 4 for now, so I'm kinda' looking for ideas on what these two can get up to. Broadly or otherwise.

Before I think of suggestions, can you answer a question for me? What is the story supposed to be? Is it just trying out new ways to hypnotize the subject, or is there a direction that you want this story to lead to? (I'm assuming the latter, seeing as you're worried about the characters moving to fast in their relationship to make part 4 your part 3.)

At least initially it's mostly supposed to involve Ara trying out via hypnosis stuff she'd be too nervous/shy about otherwise. It'll probably expand beyond that fairly soon after but a little episodic stuff to start didn't seem like it'd hurt.

Have you considered playing with post hypnotic suggestions? I mean it seems like a reasonable place to go especially since you can use it to set up things for part 4.

I mean...I'd like to include the use of them somewhere, I'm not sure if I could stretch them out into a full part or not though. I suppose it depends on the execution.

For part 3 you could have Idol or Ara make the hypno mp3 file themselves. There are a lot of ways that could be implemented (I think).

How many pages constitutes a part? Even if you did a single post-hypnotic suggestion bonus page between parts it would smooth the transition a little, and indicate time passing that we wouldn't otherwise see.

There's no real set length, it's just down to how much space it takes me to carry out an idea. That's not a bad idea though. [since bonus pages are a thing. I guess I'll have to think about what sort of suggestions could be made.]