HypnoHub - Maybe some improvment here?

waverun

07/22/16 03:10AM

Maybe some improvment here?

Alright, so two days prior to this post, I watched an art stream by Marsminer, and I think I've managed to get some of the details down in my head finally. So I want to see if this image here is any better from the last ones I've done.

imgur.com/a/xeUkI

Or any worse. I'll try again once I get any comments that it's really bad.

Pinkanator

07/22/16 03:24AM

Oh hey! That's pretty good! The head and neck are looking a lot fuller. This may be because of Gote Bro however, so don't stop here. Keep trying to improve it, little-by-little. The hand definitely needs work though. It's far too spindly, and a little disproportionate. Try sketching around your hand in a few posistions for reference, then work from there. Great job though. I can definitely see progress.

waverun

07/22/16 03:26AM

Pinkanator said:
Oh hey! That's pretty good! The head and neck are looking a lot fuller. This may be because of Gote Bro however, so don't stop here. Keep trying to improve it, little-by-little. The hand definitely needs work though. It's far too spindly, and a little disproportionate. Try sketching around your hand in a few posistions for reference, then work from there. Great job though. I can definitely see progress.

See, this is what I was looking for. Not just critique, but advice right AFTER the critique!

Pinkanator

07/22/16 03:27AM

waverun said:
See, this is what I was looking for. Not just critique, but advice right AFTER the critique!

Well, you know I'm here to help.