Hey guys! I made a game and was hoping to get some feedback on it! The art is done by our very own Aiykawa! Anyway, here's the rough background of the game:

Essentially, it'll be a sandbox-ish styled game where you enslave a number of girls which you improve your control over them by "training" them, which basically means using your control on them to do various stuff.

The basically flow of the game would be like:
-Find ways to indoctrinate the target
-Train the target to exert further control after indoctrination
-After the target is sufficiently trained, there would be an event that you can do to push your slave to the next level


There's essentially only the intro in the current build, mostly cause I wasted most of the time trying to fix the foundation of the game.

The final product is expected to have:
Bust portraits for all girls and main character (Done)
24 scenes(?) (4 for each girl), excluding variations (Done)
3 different endings
6 enslavable girls (Done)

But should probably note that this is an underestimation cause I don't wanna over-promise and under-deliver.

Also have a Discord set up in the event anything happens to the Patreon! Here's the invite link! www.discord.gg/T8Ud58U

18th July 2020:
Version 0.31d has been updated! Added a lot of new stuff since v0.28, so come take a look if you're feeling up for it!

Download link: www.patreon.com/posts/39445358


As per usual, just leave me a comment either here or in the link if there are any bug and/or if you have some feedback that you think can make the game better!

P.S. I'll be giving away a free copy of the Fairy Tail doujin that's being worked on and the sneak peeks for next month! You can read more here: www.patreon.com/posts/first-chapter-be-34963770

Might want to remove all the default RPGmaker assets before exporting a version. You can save a good amount of space by doing this.

Edit: I tried playing the game and the player crashes before it even gets to the main menu. "RGSS3 Player has stopped working"
Not sure if this is my pc or the game. Looking into it more myself.

Probably a mix of both. RPGMaker is finicky sometimes. I've generally found that uninstalling the general use assets, and then restarting my computer, and then going online and reinstalling the general use assets tends to fix any "RGSS3 Player has stopped working" issues for a few months minimum.

That is weird, just tried downloading it and opening it again, didn't seem to have any problems, maybe try downloading it again? If the problem persist let me know, maybe I'll upload a new link or something!

I played a little of it before it crashed. It seems that clicking on the piano caused it I think?

Edit: All right, I've played some more and I'll give my thoughts on it okay? The game is very rough in terms of what exactly you're supposed to do. I understand that I used the control on the girl, but wasn't told to use her as means of labour. Also, the amount of control exp gained was very minimal. And when i finally got enough to upgrade, it wouldn't let me.
I still don't understand the point of the school. Will there be benefits for going to school?
What;s the point of the items you can buy? Will there be combat or something later on in the game.?

Also multiple bugs:

Clicked on piano resulted in CTD
Old guy next to mayor changes character model when talked to
Exiting the tent leads me to the other part of the forest, below the house/lab instead of outside the tent.
Tried going to class, but even when in seat, the class never started

Suggestions:
Once asked to strip, have her in that form until told not to. (Unaware that she's naked?)
If person is following, have a chance to actually comunicate with the subject. It's annoying to have to go all the way back to the house if one wants to change anything.
More desctiption on items like the stuff in the lab as other than it;s initial description, I have no idea what they do. I used one item and it did nothing as far as I could tell.

Yeap! I'll be fixing the piano bug! The old man next to the mayor, the class and also the tent! Probably forgot to save some of the changes I've made, sorry about that and thanks for finding the bugs!

Had feedback on the issue that instructions weren't very clear! So I think I'll add a pseudo tutorial kinda thing where it shows people you can use the items or stuff like that!

Been thinking of adding the communicate while they are following you, it's a planned feature, but I figured it would be better to add in more characters first! But I'll definitely add it!

As for the stay naked permanently thing, I might have a walk around town/ forest while naked thing implemented when their levels are higher! Thanks for that!


Right now Aiykawa is drawing the second character at the moment! Come and take a look if you have time!

picarto.tv/Aiykawa

Edit: Stream over, thanks for coming guys!

Fixed some bugs that cause crashing the game or just causing annoyance in general, so yeah! v0.01b is out!

Link: www.patreon.com/posts/v0-01b-update-15134886

Hey guys! Just released an update and as per usual, let me know if there are any bugs or issues yeah!

Hey guys, updated the original post with the link with the latest version of the game! Also have a sneak peek of a scene that will be in the next version of the game!

www.patreon.com/posts/sneak-peek-of-15806426

Hey guys! Updated the game! And have some really awesome news, the game is now backlog free among other things! Read all about it here if you are interested!: www.patreon.com/posts/version-0-03-is-16159075

Personally I'm pretty stroked! I also included a link to directly download the game if you all are not interested in reading the changelog and other stuff! It's all in the original post!

As per usual, let me know if there are any bugs or issues yeah!

Hey, sorry for not testing out the previous builds. I've been busy with stuff. However I tried out this new build and have already encountered two bugs. Both in the school. I skipped the intro and went went to school. After class, its now dusk I think, I went into the classroom next door and found that after talking to the teacher in there a blue dialogue box shows up but nothing in it. A harmless bug but a bug nonetheless. However, going across the hall to the bathroom, in front of the toilet there is a shiny thing. Clicking on it gives me the dialogue saying it's an empty classroom and such, and then freezes the game. I was forced to exit it and start over. I'll continue to play and update if I see anything else.

I can confirm both of averageguy17's bugs. Also, not real serious, but little sister appears briefly in the morning and then disappears.

Unrelated, but I'm apparently bad at this game: the change log says there's a place to rewatch scenes, as well as an indoctrination event for Lena, and I haven't found either of them. :-(

Well, I just tried it out. There are several problems, I've noticed. Some are minor, like the clown having frankly forced rhymes, and a weird glitch where food on the table disappears for a second when you select it before reappearing. But my biggest problem is the way that the MC originally tests the controller, on his mom.

Incest is one of the biggest turn offs out there for me, and I don't think I'm alone on that front. I'm not saying you should cut that scene from the game, I just don't think it should be required for every player, especially not so early on. Maybe instead there could be a choice about whether or not to test on her, and if you say yes, then there's a choice about what to get her to do, with a more tame option in lieu of the incest. Choices like that might contribute to what ending you get later on, too.

Sorry about the bug, found the problem and I'll be fixing and releasing an update with the bugs fixed!



Yeah, did the rhyming thing on a whim and now I'm in too deep to pull out, haha.
On a serious note, I get where you are coming from, I'll probably release a version without those issues in the future! Currently have more pressing matters to work on like the final two characters, but I want you to know I'll seriously think through your feedback

bug list:
- I cannot talk with Reka (the sister) at night in her room.
- in Kay's house, the wall separate the kitchen and the rest of the screen can be walked on => the character walk out of the frame
issue:
- i cannot find the ways to indoctrinate 2 new characters, need walk through asap