If I continue my little comic series, what would you guys like to see?

I can certainly craft more brainwashing scenes, but I like the slice of life humor approach and the element of things not always going to plan.

I could also focus on single images instead of multi panel comics, but that makes any kind of story harder to tell.

slice of life where one character somehow manages to get brainwashed in the background by something in every comic. :P

Ehhh that kinda goes against... well let me put it another way. Mind control loses a lot of its impact if it can be shaken off at the end of the episode. I have always hated that. You get the sexy superheroine under your control... then they remember their friends, or the control method fails... it's always *SOMETHING* in the last few minutes and by the next episode they're always back to normal. Bah. No. Boring! It's so much better if the brainwashing is permanent.

How about, "slice of life", but with the twist of one of the main characters being brainwashed and fecking up all the normal life stuff? Like, "why do I need to wear shoes? I'm a bunny! Duh! Bunnies don't wear shoes!" "No shoes, no shirt, no service. That includes bunnies."

Stuff like that's pretty cutesy imo.

Hee hee hee I sorta already have that with Candy the cat girl.

I also have a decision made on a third character to add to the mix. Expect them to show up in the next comic.

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Nah, what I mean is more like, two characters are chatting or interacting with each other in a normal slice-of-life sort of way, but in the background behind them some random person is being mind controlled without them noticing or reacting to it.

Ah I see. I did something like that before. I'll consider it.

I suggest using bright and dark as contrasts. Sometimes it should be funny, sometimes it should be a bit spooky, sometimes it should just be weird. Keep things to mind control but write what you like.

I suggest you use the "corrupted plot" approach. Watch normal slice-of-life and comedies, and then ask yourself how it'd be different (and the same) if it was about someone being brainwashed into a sex slave and used. Watch how they make gags and then see how you can apply that to your situation.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=YqDzoCuDypk

Take that for an example. Just imagine the same scene is applied to a blowjob. Change the direction as necessary. The idea is that it's a back and forth conversation about how to blow someone. Keep it in a cheery tone but swap back and forth between jokes about method and details and darker fetish or brainwashing scenes.

Girl A, "The only way to give a blowjob is to start at the head."
Girl B, "I don't think it'd be good unless I was plugged."
Girl C, "Aaaah! Get me out of here!"
*Zappity*
Girl C , "I prefer starting on the balls."
Girl A , "Would you like some whipped cream?"
Girl B, "Or a buttplug?"
Girl C, "Sure!"

Something like that.

while the bunnygirl is fine, she's basically average for a stroke concept.... she shows the process works, and is sexy, but the catgirl, so far, is your real primary story telling concept.... yes, hypnosis works on her... but never quite right, and to comic results... even from before she was hypnotized, she had an atypical, comic response [not "ahhh, I'm being held captive!" but "there's my night..."

in other words, the bunnygirl/mad scientist is your straight man, and the cat girl is your bananaman

so what I want to see is;

1) other ways the cat girl can exasperate the scientist, especially with cat like behavior
a) knocking things over or snatching things [usually food] meant for others
b) urine or hairballs anywhere that isn't the litterbox
c) wandering outside ....uh oh! need to hope no one sees or can explain it away
d) comes back with a prize/kill
e) random pouncing "attacks" [sexy attacks]
f) seeming to desperately want something,
f) bathing trouble and/or licking
g) being lazy/cute.... and/or mad scientist wants something, but so lazy-cute, can't bear to enforce it

2) why she became a cat girl and not a bunny girl... at the time, the explanation was "a glitch" - that's a boring answer, but fine at the time

is the base process more complex then he thought, and he'll continue experimenting and getting strange results [harem comedy] ? Does it draw from the person's individual mind, so the results aren't very predictable? Or is the catgirl a unique case for some reason?

3) in cannon, the mad scientist mentioned a hero might try to undo the hypnosis, so you have some potential conflict there. If you want it to be temporary, the hero is the antagonist and follows the rule of 3 [protagonist loses first match to establish threat, ties second match to show growth, and wins 3rd match, triumphing over antagonist]

also, hero as in simply someone realistically heroic, or bond spy, or hero as is super hero/magical girl/sentai

4) alternatively, the hero could become your hero - while it is played for laughs, the mad scientist is randomly grabbing people, regardless of their current lives, and making them permanent sex slaves; arguably murder by ego-death... in the long term, that sort of thing isn't likable

Now that the plot is established, after a rescue you could deal with someone both trying to stop a mad scientist who might have anyone brainwashed while also keeping a sexed up over-obedient pet girl

5) the mad scientist said the brainwashing is permanent.... but what about doing a 2nd brainwashing into being who they were before, with no underlying command to obey?

Lot of thought put into these posts. Thoughts I'll take into consideration.