Almost finished finally making an OC, looking for some feedback and or suggestions.
So this is something I wanted to do for some time. Everyone has their own OC's, meanwhile I've been stuck on Aqua. People tend to notice that more as well. I don't know a word to describe the feeling, but it's negative. While I couldn't decide at first, I eventually did figure out what I wanted to go for. I'm almost done, but I was just hoping for some feedback or suggestions beforehand.
* Name: (Hahaha, curse my indecisiveness)
* Gender: female
* Age: Young, 14-26 (Character can be whatever age necessary, default younger on the scale, more details at end)
* Personality/Story:Basically She's the princess of her "kingdom"(again, don't have full details) that is basically a magical prodigy, being one of the most powerful forces in her home. She's a bit haughty, but she's not a dick. She's definitely more benevolent, but a bit of a troll. She tends to use her abilities for quite a bit of things, but not completely abuse them. When she does hypnotize/TF people into things like maids, fellow girly princesses, some other 'stuff', she won't keep them like that and will almost never do it to the innocent involuntarily. She'll do it to troublemakers and others though. That being said when she does do it to the innocent, she'll often ask in advance. If not, she tends write up an IOU(like I said, slight troll). If so, she'll often compensate the 'victim' afterward. She's not a fan of evil, egotistical rulers or those who do try to keep people as complete slaves. Those tend to make her mad, which is not good... for them.
There's definitely more to her personality and story than that though, but I don't want to go into details.
* Powers/Abilities:
** Powerful magic
** Combat magic: she's a very powerful fighter when it comes to magic, having control of all sorts of spells( think like elemental magic, but other stuff as well)
** Transformative/Hypnotic magic: Basically she can hypnotize people, change their clothes and/or forms.
** High Resistance: She heavily resists other methods of Hypnotism through magic and powers
** Magic overload: Basically, if her magic isn't used for a specific amount of time, it will began to 'leak' or overload, so to speak. This will actually free her from capture and MC.
*Weaknesses: Not physically durable, but her magic makes up for most of it.
Can't hold wands/staffs, Basically she actually breaks them due to sheer amount of magic her body gives off.
Appearance: Another thing I'm stuck on, Her appearance. I have a basic idea of what I want, by I'm stuck on her dress(colors and design) and hair style.
For hairstyle I'm stuck between going for basic ringlets, something along the line of drill hair, or both( like her having ringlets and a sort of drill pony tail, or maybe two) Sadly, I'm indecisive as all hell. She's most likely gonna be blonde because I'm a fan of cliches.
One last big thing though, going back to her age and story. Curse my brain, as I try to create a character for pics and other stuff, my idle mind goes and begins actually making up actual serious scenarios(Non-lewd, whatever else) Basically that was where the age thing came up, as I like younger less experienced protagonists, but if she's young she can't be used for NSFW. And my brain made a backstory where she's young. I somehow managed to make genuine stories for a character I planned to use for fetish art.
* Name: (Hahaha, curse my indecisiveness)
* Gender: female
* Age: Young, 14-26 (Character can be whatever age necessary, default younger on the scale, more details at end)
* Personality/Story:Basically She's the princess of her "kingdom"(again, don't have full details) that is basically a magical prodigy, being one of the most powerful forces in her home. She's a bit haughty, but she's not a dick. She's definitely more benevolent, but a bit of a troll. She tends to use her abilities for quite a bit of things, but not completely abuse them. When she does hypnotize/TF people into things like maids, fellow girly princesses, some other 'stuff', she won't keep them like that and will almost never do it to the innocent involuntarily. She'll do it to troublemakers and others though. That being said when she does do it to the innocent, she'll often ask in advance. If not, she tends write up an IOU(like I said, slight troll). If so, she'll often compensate the 'victim' afterward. She's not a fan of evil, egotistical rulers or those who do try to keep people as complete slaves. Those tend to make her mad, which is not good... for them.
There's definitely more to her personality and story than that though, but I don't want to go into details.
* Powers/Abilities:
** Powerful magic
** Combat magic: she's a very powerful fighter when it comes to magic, having control of all sorts of spells( think like elemental magic, but other stuff as well)
** Transformative/Hypnotic magic: Basically she can hypnotize people, change their clothes and/or forms.
** High Resistance: She heavily resists other methods of Hypnotism through magic and powers
** Magic overload: Basically, if her magic isn't used for a specific amount of time, it will began to 'leak' or overload, so to speak. This will actually free her from capture and MC.
*Weaknesses: Not physically durable, but her magic makes up for most of it.
Can't hold wands/staffs, Basically she actually breaks them due to sheer amount of magic her body gives off.
Appearance: Another thing I'm stuck on, Her appearance. I have a basic idea of what I want, by I'm stuck on her dress(colors and design) and hair style.
For hairstyle I'm stuck between going for basic ringlets, something along the line of drill hair, or both( like her having ringlets and a sort of drill pony tail, or maybe two) Sadly, I'm indecisive as all hell. She's most likely gonna be blonde because I'm a fan of cliches.
One last big thing though, going back to her age and story. Curse my brain, as I try to create a character for pics and other stuff, my idle mind goes and begins actually making up actual serious scenarios(Non-lewd, whatever else) Basically that was where the age thing came up, as I like younger less experienced protagonists, but if she's young she can't be used for NSFW. And my brain made a backstory where she's young. I somehow managed to make genuine stories for a character I planned to use for fetish art.