DanieldervUniverse
02/15/19 11:58PM
I have a weird crossover fafic idea that matters to you all, at least for you to say "No!"
Okay, this might be the most impressive or disappointing thing ever done on the hub, depends on the point of view. I am a "writer" so to say, and I had this idea of bringing together the Hub's OC, starting from the celebrities all the way to the lesser known, in one gigantic fanfiction that basically tries to create a single continuity between all of them, re-imagining several of their backstories to make them "fit" together.

But before we get to the full explanation, there are a few notes I have to make, to be fully correct about the whole project:
1. I am italian (yeah, a few jokes are allowed), and my english isn't always correct, I might need a beta reader to pinpoint the possible mistakes. If want to read something of me... well, you can't 'cause the few things I wrote in english, especially about hypnosis, weren't so good, and I doubt most of you can understand a word in italian, even with (and especially with) Google Translate. Sorry people.
2. This project is going to require changes to some basic aspects of the OC, taking for example Febe, Inma and Joyce, so you must the aware that "No!" is a possible answer. You're not going to hurt anyone by saying that, I have sufficient ego to hold that one.
3. I'm bored and I didn't come forward before with this, even if I'm thinking about it since two years, because is a little complicated as a project and plus I'm the shy type, so I didn't really make a name for myself on the Hub.
PS: don't ask me commission anyway, I don't do them.

So, now that we've cleared that and if you are still reading:
Plot
Is very simple actually, I think all is needed is just an excuse: there's Hypno City, were most of the human OC live, that is a special place in the world due to its connection with the "Magic Wild" the immense magic realm from which creatures like Kaa'lin, or Kenneth, and all the other supernatural being (except Hypno-tan) originate from. Is common to have them walk in disguise (or not, depends on how charming or powerful they are) in the town. For last there is Deep Space, besically the open space with planets and stuff, from which creatures like medifrogmatio's aliens or Nedo-exo-can's nagas come from.
With this premises, the story is basically a "fight" (hypno-style) between the "Hypno-girls" (Erika, Crystal, Hypno-tan, Crimson, Naomi, Kaa'lin, Myuk etcetera) and medifrogmatio's invading aliens, controlled by a so called "Alien-Mother", who I a came up with because I needed a second villain, that is trying to expand her field of experiments on Earth itself.

To be more detailed about the characters I managed to involve until now:
Cast: (non quite complete, but for starting...)

Er-ikaa
Erika: One of the main heroines. She appears for the first time in class while she is listening to mrs Erickson’s in class. Later, she will be one of those that will evoke Hypno-tan (like when young people evoke demons in movies, psychics and all the band), and then she’ll be involved in the the plot to stop the invasion of mind-controlling aliens.

Evilka: I don’t know yet, maybe a double personality of Erika, like Crystal’s Aima or Kaa’lin Super Sayan Succubus form... or whatever you call it (I like to make jokes).

Zko
Crystal: One of the main heroines. She appears for the first time in class with her companions. Later, she will be one of those that will evoke Hypno-tan, and then she’ll be involved in the the plot to stop the invasion of mind-controlling aliens.

Alex: The elder sister of Crystal. She will end up mesmerized by the aliens almost immediately during the invasion. (She might be just a cameo)

Aima: Crystal's second personality; she tends to come out only when Crystal is in danger or when another "Mistress" gets overwhelmingly too close to her possession.

Mrs Erickson: Teacher of the protagonists. She will end up hypnotized by aliens and later I have no idea.

Katie: One of Crystal's friends. She will “sacrifice” herself to protect the heroines from the alien horde.

(Mystery Boy): Crystal’s friend that always talks to her trough skype. He will be crafty enough to escape the aliens and then he will help the girls from his computer.

Myuk

Joyce: Joyce, Febe and Myuk's friends, original of the "Magic Wild". She is one of the main heroines. She first appears in the jungle trying to steal some magic nectar from Daisy to throw a surprise party to Myuk in the human world; and then she’ll be involved in the the plot to stop the invasion of mind-controlling aliens.

Inma: Joyce, Febe and Myuk’s friend, original of the "Magic Wild". She is one of the main heroines. She first appears in the jungle trying to steal some magic nectar from Daisy to throw a surprise party to Myuk in the human world; and then she’ll be involved in the the plot to stop the invasion of mind-controlling aliens.

Febe: Joyce, Inma and Myuk’s friend. original of the "Magic Wild". She is one of the main heroines. She first appears in the jungle trying to steal some magic nectar from Daisy to throw a surprise party to Myuk in the human world; and then she’ll be involved in the the plot to stop the invasion of mind-controlling aliens.

Myuk-ko: One of the main heroines. She appears for the first time in class while she is listening Erickson’s lesson. Later, she will be one of those that will evoke Hypno-tan, and then she’ll be involved in the the plot to stop the invasion of mind-controlling aliens.

Daisy: Coming from the "Magic Wild", she appears harrassing Joyce, Inma and Febe due to their attempt of theft. She is stopped by Kaa’lin.

medrifogmatio
Kassidy: One of the main heroines and an alien. She is "saved" from the mother-alien control by the girls during the escape. She decides to join them in the “fight”.

Sierra: Kassidy's intimate friend and partner; she will spent most of the story going in and out of the mind-control, sometimes helping and sometimes screwing the heroines.

All the others: The Alien-Mother’s army, sexual inducted zombie-soldier, the shoot mind control rays with their gun (NO HAGURE, please). After the "fight" is over they split. Some remain on Earth, living among the humans and other creatures of the supernatural, and some get back to space.

iamaneagle
Zoey: Coming from the Magic Wild; together with her sister she is one of Kaa'lin's two devoted servants, but they’re almost intimate friends.

Chloe: Zoey's sister, she also subjected to Kaa'lin (although it could be something more).

Hypnohub
Hypno-tan: One of the main heroines, she is the secret spirit\gene\patron of Hypno City. She has several supernatural abilities, and “protects all those who practice hypnosis”. Once summoned, and once the aliens invade, she’ll decide she prefers the old “free” Hypno City rather than the weird zombie-reproducing-horde handled by the aliens, so she joins “the fight” to stop the Alien-Mother.

mariosofchan \ SuperSargeSpecial
Kaa'lin: Very powerful succubus, with a double personality. She is one of the main heroines, and will appear the first time as she flies around her territory in the Magic Wild, saving Joyce, Inma and Febe from Daisy. It will remain involved in the fight against aliens due to them ruining her hunting ground.

Penken
Naomi: One of the main heroines, she appears for the first time in class while she scolds her friends in a low voice because they complain about the lesson. For some reason her personality undergoes abrupt changes, including a change in clothing and physical abilities (police-girl-Naomi, angry-Naomi, and others to be, due to Penken’s weird April Fool’s gift).

Stepfordcrimson
Crimson: She is one of the main heroines. But she isn’t from their school, she’s a web celebrity who enjoys cosplay and role-playing as an hypnotized girl. She inadvertently escapes the alien mind-control by acting already hypnotized and later joins the party.

Myself
Red Star: The superhero of Hypno City. He is basically the only living being in the whole town who fights against evil hypnotists, and for such he is cursed by Hypno-tan, forced to fall almost instantly under any kind of hypnosis. That’s why he is a mean, cold son of a bitch, and spends most part of the story getting saved by the girls by the aliens’ control. Even with his superhero abilities, he is basically helpless. At the end of the story he finally accepts hypnosis and changes his name to Hypno-Star, founding a "superhero group" (The Hypno Force) with the others main protagonists.

The White: One of Red Star’s nemesis, one who enjoys playing in the shadows even if he is easily spotted. He is the one who invites the Alien-Mother to Earth, without a particular reason except to finally defeat Red Star and show his brother Black that he’s the best villain.

Black: The mad scientists who spends his time hypnotizing people in Hypno City and getting beaten up by Red Star. He appears at the beginning and at the end of the story.

The only bad thing about this whole massive ordeal, ignoring eventual "expansion" later on like spin-off or sequels to involve more characters in the plot, is the need of some adjustments about the characters personal stories that usually hurts a lot the idea the original makers had for their characters. But even so, I'm glad I have finally managed to talk to all of you about this. Even if you not agree, it was worth trying.
Thank you all and To the Next! Ciao.
DouDile
02/16/19 01:21AM
You put all the same OC characters involved in "Cowboys vs Aliens"

Now..."Baebs vs Alíen Mother"

Story + Hypno + Pleasure + resisting + Hypno again + defeat the Alíen Mother = Final Fantasy Victory Fanfare.
bullet
02/16/19 01:26AM
I'd be willing to be a proofreader
mariosonicfan
02/16/19 05:54AM
I'd be down with something like that if you'd be willing to do this massive undertaking lol.

However I do ask that whenever you start just contact me on dm's here and talk about stuff with me about Kaa'lin. that's all I ask :)
CorruptionPrincess
02/16/19 06:31AM
haha feel free to use myself as crimsons little sis ^_^
MissCass
02/16/19 09:04AM
How many cans of ravioli do I have to send you to be involved in this? Cause I LOVE this idea! And as an up and cummer (heh) I think I could contribute at least a bit
DanieldervUniverse
02/16/19 10:39PM
DouDile said:
You put all the same OC characters involved in "Cowboys vs Aliens"

Now..."Baebs vs Alíen Mother"

Story + Hypno + Pleasure + resisting + Hypno again + defeat the Alíen Mother = Final Fantasy Victory Fanfare.


Couldn't have said it better.

bullet said:
I'd be willing to be a proofreader


Then I humbly accept your offer. If I get all authorization to proceed, that is, but you're on.

mariosonicfan said:
I'd be down with something like that if you'd be willing to do this massive undertaking lol.

However I do ask that whenever you start just contact me on dm's here and talk about stuff with me about Kaa'lin. that's all I ask :)


That was the answer I was hoping for. I've been your fan for a while, like you can guess, but anyway I'm fully aware that, even when I need to change the backstory, the original personality and characterization must remain intact. And no one can help me doing it better than the author himself\herself.

CorruptionPrincess said:
haha feel free to use myself as crimsons little sis ^_^


I can consider it. I'm not sure what kind of sister she should be, because there are multiple interesting options. Is she the secret mistress who acts like a naive, cute and smiling little sister? Or a more possessive kind "I don't give a fuck, keep your... whatever those are, away from my sister!". Or the usual Jacelyn-Crimson thing?

MissCass said:
How many cans of ravioli do I have to send you to be involved in this? Cause I LOVE this idea! And as an up and cummer (heh) I think I could contribute at least a bit


Ravioli? I didn't even know that was a thing. I was expecting something about lasagna or pizza... on second thought no, ravioli is fine. Forget lasagna and pizza, don't you dare think of lasagna and pizza, don't you dare! Thank you for your support, I like to work for free, I just need your interest.
Myuk
03/02/19 07:55PM
I think the idea is cool ~ go for it ~

ofc i have my own canon to deal with huehue
DanieldervUniverse
03/21/19 12:09PM
I guess now is a good time for me to get to work. Better late than ever.
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