HypnoHub - [Progress] [R18 Visual novel] Project Hameln Puppet Piper (update 24 Oct 2020)

wei88

01/06/20 09:33PM

[Progress] [R18 Visual novel] Project Hameln Puppet Piper (update 24 Oct 2020)

I have started a visual novel game "Hameln Puppet Piper" for a couple of month.
That take a lot of time than I expected.Maybe someone think I just quit this project.
So I think I should post a progress of this project here.

www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/78760018

{Edit 4/4/2020}
I just create my subscriptstar account
subscribestar.adult/wei88
Here's some appetizer before maindish

Update 24Oct2020
links:
subscribestar.adult/posts/206595

-another route (non-ugly bastard route)
lot of dialogue will be fixed later.

TheMadPrince

01/06/20 11:48PM

It certainly looks fun, but does it absolutely need to follow the "disgusting old/fat pervert" trope mostly present in Hentai? No offense meant, but I at any rate would much rather see some, er... younger action going on.

Nadie

01/07/20 12:48AM

wei88 said:
I have started a visual novel game "Hameln Puppet Piper" for a couple of month.
That take a lot of time than I expected.Maybe someone think I just quit this project.
So I think I should post a progress of this project here.

www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/78760018

Well, I 'm considering if I should make a Patreon for this project.(This game is free but for some donation.).But this game contain Mindcontrol and also some rape.

Link's broker for me, just says "an error has occurred."

IDPet

01/07/20 01:13AM

Sounds nice, the girl looks cute and the empty eyes are promising, however the ugly bastard part is not exactly my cup of tea xD.

Nadie said:
Link's broker for me, just says "an error has occurred."

do you have a pixiv account?

Nadie

01/07/20 01:43AM

IDPet said:
Sounds nice, the girl looks cute and the empty eyes are promising, however the ugly bastard part is not exactly my cup of tea xD.

do you have a pixiv account?

No. I have to make one?

IDPet

01/07/20 01:56AM

Nadie said:
No. I have to make one?

You need a pixiv account in order to see pictures tagged as adult content.

GrandDad

01/07/20 04:03AM

The arts are good, I hope you see this through!

Nadie

01/07/20 04:09AM

IDPet said:
You need a pixiv account in order to see pictures tagged as adult content.

Well, I'm trying to sign up, but it just keeps directing me to the "error has occurred" page.

wei88

01/07/20 05:04AM

TheMadPrince said:
It certainly looks fun, but does it absolutely need to follow the "disgusting old/fat pervert" trope mostly present in Hentai? No offense meant, but I at any rate would much rather see some, er... younger action going on.

This game have 3routes ,the "disgusting pervert" is in the evilroute.The others route is also R18 but with our protagonist (a bit vanilla story ,not disgusting ).
Honestly I 'm not quite prefer in "disgusting old/fat pervert" too. but the subject is related with something like this.

IDPet said:
Sounds nice, the girl looks cute and the empty eyes are promising, however the ugly bastard part is not exactly my cup of tea xD.

do you have a pixiv account?

Well, just only one route lol.

Nadie said:
Well, I'm trying to sign up, but it just keeps directing me to the "error has occurred" page.

I 'm just uploading here
hypnohub.net/post/show/89702

Nadie

01/15/20 06:13AM

wei88 said:
I 'm just uploading here
hypnohub.net/post/show/89702

Oh, shoot, sorry! I didn't see this until right now! I think the new scenes are more promising than before.

The doms aren't exactly pretty, but I don't really think they're horribly ugly, either. My only objection would be if the girl were to wake up from her trance in the middle of their 'fun.' So long as she stays completely blank and obedient through whatever they put her through, I'm totally on-board with their appearance.

wei88

02/05/20 06:27PM

a few update progress here...
hypnohub.net/post/show/90...-topless-undressing-wei88
An "Ugly bastard Route" will finished soon

wei88

09/24/20 01:11PM

Update
Ver. 23Sep2020 release
link in this post.
subscribestar.adult/posts/180988
Description
1.Ugly bastard event (bad route).
2.A good route is under construction.
Some art event will be fixed later.

Nadie

09/24/20 09:14PM

wei88 said:
Update
Ver. 23Sep2020 release
link in this post.
subscribestar.adult/posts/180988
Description
1.Ugly bastard event (bad route).
2.A good route is under construction.
Some art event will be fixed later.

I really do like the changes you've made here. More art and better, and the fact that she is completely mindless throughout almost the whole thing makes me not care so much that they're ugly bastards. That short moment when she wakes up, though, was pretty unpleasant, though I suppose that was intentional after all.

I will also note that the dialogue is in a real need for a proof reader: the grammar mistakes etc. are at best distracting and at worst they make it impossible to understand what they're saying.

wei88

09/25/20 10:12PM

Nadie said:
I really do like the changes you've made here. More art and better, and the fact that she is completely mindless throughout almost the whole thing makes me not care so much that they're ugly bastards. That short moment when she wakes up, though, was pretty unpleasant, though I suppose that was intentional after all.

I will also note that the dialogue is in a real need for a proof reader: the grammar mistakes etc. are at best distracting and at worst they make it impossible to understand what they're saying.

sorry about that "waking" event.
I just realise I misunderstand something.You said "objection" not "objective"…/facepalm
Well others route have no more "waking" event.

hypnoshadow

09/29/20 02:18PM

to be honest just changing the ugly bastard to a generic 20 something year olds would work a lot better for most people, know i hate the damn fatty with the face of a pig going through a blender

if you dont want to change it though i can understand why