I have a story I want to write but I couldn't find a satisfying image for it, so, even though I'm a maniper, I tried to draw it.

Now, I don't want to write the whole thing only to have the image blocked for poor quality. So I'm asking you, is the image there ( nsa40.casimages.com/img/2020/02/26/200226123746623924.png ) even somewhat decent enough to go on the site?

Thanks in advance.


[EDIT: Sorry for the parenthesis making the link unreadable]

No offense, but I don't really think a 404 message is gonna fly

The link is broken.

Get rid of the ending ) and the image works.

Thus: nsa40.casimages.com/img/2020/02/26/200226123746623924.png

Ah..well to put it bluntly it's pretty rough. There's some hint of promise but it will take a fair bit of work to get on the site proper.

Ah..well to put it bluntly it's pretty rough. There's some hint of promise but it will take a fair bit of work to get on the site proper.

Yeah, that's what I feared.
An idea of what could help?

A few months of dedicated practice, paying an artist to draw your image, or just writing a story and not sticking it on a picture.

Your proportions are no wrong, but you need to work on the bottom part of her body, I suggest to start with simple poses and references (you will need some research, try to look for pictures and poses that you like and try to mimic it).

The important thing is try to calculate the proportions.

Short answer: begging.
Honestly, if you're not looking to get really involved on the art side, it might be easier (or at the very least faster) to ask nicely with a cherry on top if someone would sketch something up for you, or you can commission a proper image (costs money obviously). If you just wanna make a hubworthy image, that's not too hard if you use a reference image to fix some of the glaring anatomy mistakes (pay attention to the crotch and hip region specifically), but taking the time to build a solid foundation for something that'll actually attract eyeballs would probably take months at least on your level.

So I kind of drew up an overlay to show the mistakes a bit clearly---granted, porn isn't something I draw a lot of and anatomy is something I struggle with a bit myself, but I tried for something a bit more natural-looking.

sta.sh/028ulrqkilu6

In your drawing your character's lower torso is far too long and a bit blobby and formless. The butt and legs can be difficult to draw in that pose, so I really suggest studying references and learning more about what shapes the body makes in particular. You can get a better grasp of anatomy if you translate the body into simple three-dimensional forms.