eldomtom2 said:
Nice detailed descriptions. Brief descriptions do nothing for me.
also no photos
I agree on the descriptions, but not the pictures, so I guess adding pictures or not are both options here ? It might depend on how relevent to the cyoa they are, or the quality of them maybe ?
As for me, I'd say I really like new ideas. Seeing forms of mind control or characters that are too basic isn't as fun as seeing something you didn't thought about, or maybe at least revisiting the thing.
For the number of possible choices, it's nice to have a sweet spot bettween "I can have what I like" and "I have to make choices", there's a lot of interesting systems out there so I'm not sure how specific this can get, but it's worth a thought I think.
It's kind of hard to be more specific, there's so many possibilities with CYOA