Kaaslave23
05/25/20 12:44AM
Lyrics to a poetic induction?
Hi I was trying to think of a more poetic induction, and was wondering if anyone here was more creative than me.

It starts like:

"My magic stare can hypnotize,
So please look deep into my eyes..."

Or alternatively,

"My magic stare can mesmerize,
So please look deep into my eyes..."

Could also substitute "stare" with "gaze" or "please" with "just"
Sargin2
05/25/20 01:12AM
Kaaslave23 said:
Hi I was trying to think of a more poetic induction, and was wondering if anyone here was more creative than me.

It starts like:

"My magic stare can hypnotize,
So please look deep into my eyes..."

Or alternatively,

"My magic stare can mesmerize,
So please look deep into my eyes..."

Could also substitute "stare" with "gaze" or "please" with "just"


Look up Ross Jefferies "Speed Seduction." There are a lot of good poem inductions in all of his books.

Use the word "imagine" as it forces people to think and drift into trance. Confuse the reader or ease them into trance.
Ogodei-Khan
05/25/20 07:33PM
This is a bit open-ended. Induction for what and under what circumstances?
geekgirl8
05/25/20 09:33PM
I make up poems like these for my OC all the time, but whether or not they're really any good or effective is really up to interpretation, I guess. I came up with this on the fly:

"I am the key, and you the lock
You are the door, I am the knock
I turn and twist, you let me in
And I become the keeper within."
Hypnomaid20
05/25/20 09:42PM
For some reason this feels like it just begs to be cringy x: not that all poetic inductions are, but it's just so easy to end up with stuff like

Girl you were so tough and brave
But now you're my slave

Girl take off your bra
Cause I'm your masta

Oh hello there, hey
You will now obey

You have some nerve
Now you will serve

I know those were terrible, but I just laughed so much writing these x:
Pinkanator
05/25/20 10:01PM
Hypnomaid20 said:
Oh hello there,


GENERAL KENOBI
Hypnomaid20
05/25/20 10:12PM
Pinkanator said:
GENERAL KENOBI


General hypnobi
DarkMask
05/25/20 10:41PM
This isn't my best work, but I'll give it a shot.


You worry over nothing
Plagued by doubts and fears
You desperately search for something
To find meaning in your years

You really want to forget?
Find the peace you deserve?
I shall give it to you, my pet
I'll be the master that you serve

Look deep into my eyes
Let the calm embrace your mind
Kindly say your good-byes
To those thoughts unrefined

Your mind shall be quiet
You have nothing more to say
Slaves do not cause riot
They need only to obey
TheKinkyFinn
05/25/20 11:36PM
Hypnomaid20 said:
For some reason this feels like it just begs to be cringy x: not that all poetic inductions are, but it's just so easy to end up with stuff like [...]


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As for my two cents to the OP, if you're going for an actual induction (at least length-wise), start slow. Leading with 'hey, can you just look into my eyes and get hypnotized' would be a weird request no matter how you say it, and I'm presuming there's at least some attempt at tact if not outright stealth involved here. Even if there isn't, I doubt it would hurt to consider the multitude of synonyms and poetic license you could take to say 'wolf' without literally saying 'wolf'.
Hypnomaid20
05/26/20 01:24AM
TheKinkyFinn said:
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Those aren't cringe, they're pretty good (:

I think working it into a song that initially keeps the mind busy and confused so the indirect induction can become more direct would work

Or just

"prepare for cum showers
Because I have hypno powers"
Cradily
05/26/20 02:45AM
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Or you can just search by the poems tag here for a few ideas. I also like reading the ones by "Poem_for_your_sprog" if you use reddit.
bugmenot
06/02/20 03:15AM
Does a knock knock joke count?

"knock knock"
"who's there?"
"three"
"three who?"
"three two one SLEEP"
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