What tense should I use for my story?
I'm working on a story and I recently finished the first chapter (or at least the first draft), and I'm a bit confused on what tense would sound the best to read. It is currently in present tense and future tense, such as using words like "is", "doing", "would", and "will" to describe character actions, but I wonder if that makes the story sound clunky. At times, especially with the current chapter, I find myself trending towards past tense (using ed at the end of words) and I'm struggling to figure out which one is appropriate. While there is a character recounting past events in the chapter, my main confusion is on events currently happening in the story and I'm a bit afraid that using past tense will make the whole story sound like something that has already happened long in the past.
Here is my story's first chapter, but I should warn you, I haven't gotten to any smut or mind control elements yet: docs.google.com/document/...eqNsmEwM/edit?usp=sharing
Here is my story's first chapter, but I should warn you, I haven't gotten to any smut or mind control elements yet: docs.google.com/document/...eqNsmEwM/edit?usp=sharing