daveyboysmith9 said: Hello my friends! I hope you are all doing well. ^^ We've come back full circle to Club Spiral and I can't believe i'ts been over 3 years since I first started this series. But as I was looking back, I found that I could have done a better job on the story for Club Spiral and for Ami Mizuno/Sailor Mercury. Considering I only intended it to be a one shot picture eventually evolved into it's own series. I'm not going to do a complete reboot of the whole series, but I felt I could flesh out the first chapter a bit, especially with how it begins. And without further ado, here is the story.
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Ami Mizuno looked at this strange CD-ROM disk she had gotten earlier that day. She had been on her way to meet her friends at Rei's shrine. She had even brought some of her text books with her to get some studying in, and perhaps talk her friends into studying with her.
But as she walked down the street, she started to notice all of these strange stores she never heard of before. Crystal Castle? Siren Gems and Fashion? Future Made? What were these stores and what kind of things did the sell? Ami pressed on and tried to get those stores out of her mind, but then she saw a place called Club Spiral. She didn't know how it happened, but she soon found herself in the entrance of this strange place.
On the left, there was a dark room that had a stage from where she could see. Going straight, she could see the shadows of slot machines and other tables more assorted to gambling. The blue haired girl blushed and turned to leave, but her eyes caught what looked like a gift shop just to the right of her. Curiously, she walked in, her keen intellect feeling a bit hazy. Something told her she needed to leave, but something else was telling her to 'come in'.
Ami then stopped in her tracks as she saw a young man with short brown hair wearing a blue suit.
"I'm sorry but we're not open yet..." He had started to say then turned to see her and he blushed himself. The next few moments were a bit awkward as the Ami asked what this place was and the young man, David she believed he had said, tried to explain how it was a Casino and Lounge. They made a bit more small talk and somewhere in her mind, she was happy that the young man seemed almost as nervous and unsure of himself talking to her as she was to him.
She then saw this CD case sitting on the counter that read, 'Increased Confidence With Hypnosis'. And the back of the package it read "Increase your curves with subliminal reconstruction".
Ami was quite skeptical and it seemed to push past her shyness as she asked questions about if this would work and had a hundred reasons why it wouldn't.
David however, just told her it was a joke gift. It was something different for his gift shop instead of the usual t-shirts and things. In fact, he wasn't even planning on selling it since he thought it could be taken the wrong way. As he tried to reach back for it, Ami found that she didn't want to give it back just yet.
And now she stood in her room, looking at this strange CD. 'Does this really do what it promises?' She thought to herself. 'I mean, the who body modification through subliminal messages is obviously not real...but... It would be nice to be a little more confident in myself...'
Ami hemmed and hawed as she looked at the CD and then just sighed.
"I guess it couldn't hurt to try it out. And that nice young man did give it to me for free.' Ami blush again as she thought about said handsome young man before shaking her head again. "I guess there's just one way to find out." She said to herself and turned her computer on.
To Be Continued...
And there is the first story. I think this one is a little better than my original idea and it gives me a chance to describe Club Spiral a little better. I hope you all like it as well as the upcoming pictures for this series.
So now I'll have to re-organize the series and make this the first picture in the pool. But I think I can do it.
Also, feel free to add any tags I may have missed. I'm don't want to add any unnecessary ones. XD
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Hello my friends! I hope you are all doing well. ^^ We've come back full circle to Club Spiral and I can't believe i'ts been over 3 years since I first started this series. But as I was looking back, I found that I could have done a better job on the story for Club Spiral and for Ami Mizuno/Sailor Mercury. Considering I only intended it to be a one shot picture eventually evolved into it's own series. I'm not going to do a complete reboot of the whole series, but I felt I could flesh out the first chapter a bit, especially with how it begins. And without further ado, here is the story.
[spoiler]
Ami Mizuno looked at this strange CD-ROM disk she had gotten earlier that day. She had been on her way to meet her friends at Rei's shrine. She had even brought some of her text books with her to get some studying in, and perhaps talk her friends into studying with her.
But as she walked down the street, she started to notice all of these strange stores she never heard of before. Crystal Castle? Siren Gems and Fashion? Future Made? What were these stores and what kind of things did the sell? Ami pressed on and tried to get those stores out of her mind, but then she saw a place called Club Spiral. She didn't know how it happened, but she soon found herself in the entrance of this strange place.
On the left, there was a dark room that had a stage from where she could see. Going straight, she could see the shadows of slot machines and other tables more assorted to gambling. The blue haired girl blushed and turned to leave, but her eyes caught what looked like a gift shop just to the right of her. Curiously, she walked in, her keen intellect feeling a bit hazy. Something told her she needed to leave, but something else was telling her to 'come in'.
Ami then stopped in her tracks as she saw a young man with short brown hair wearing a blue suit.
"I'm sorry but we're not open yet..." He had started to say then turned to see her and he blushed himself. The next few moments were a bit awkward as the Ami asked what this place was and the young man, David she believed he had said, tried to explain how it was a Casino and Lounge. They made a bit more small talk and somewhere in her mind, she was happy that the young man seemed almost as nervous and unsure of himself talking to her as she was to him.
She then saw this CD case sitting on the counter that read, 'Increased Confidence With Hypnosis'. And the back of the package it read "Increase your curves with subliminal reconstruction".
Ami was quite skeptical and it seemed to push past her shyness as she asked questions about if this would work and had a hundred reasons why it wouldn't.
David however, just told her it was a joke gift. It was something different for his gift shop instead of the usual t-shirts and things. In fact, he wasn't even planning on selling it since he thought it could be taken the wrong way. As he tried to reach back for it, Ami found that she didn't want to give it back just yet.
And now she stood in her room, looking at this strange CD. 'Does this really do what it promises?' She thought to herself. 'I mean, the who body modification through subliminal messages is obviously not real...but... It would be nice to be a little more confident in myself...'
Ami hemmed and hawed as she looked at the CD and then just sighed.
"I guess it couldn't hurt to try it out. And that nice young man did give it to me for free.' Ami blush again as she thought about said handsome young man before shaking her head again. "I guess there's just one way to find out." She said to herself and turned her computer on.
To Be Continued...
And there is the first story. I think this one is a little better than my original idea and it gives me a chance to describe Club Spiral a little better. I hope you all like it as well as the upcoming pictures for this series.
So now I'll have to re-organize the series and make this the first picture in the pool. But I think I can do it.
Also, feel free to add any tags I may have missed. I'm don't want to add any unnecessary ones. XD
Until next time, take care! ^^
OMG OMG This was soooo fast thaaaank youuu!!!!!