HypnoHub - i need help for a caption

jigiyak

12/30/22 01:28PM

IDPet said:
The text on the top looks a bit chopped.
The sentences that starts with "listen here you insect" "did he just interrupt" and "I still can't believe" have the first letter with a different color.

The rest looks good.

you're an awful proofreader lmao, i just read the caption one last time and noticed how i messed up the whole image, right before i was going to post it

TheGrandOleRuski

12/31/22 08:03AM

That fox is incredibly fluffy.

IDPet

12/31/22 03:37PM

jigiyak said:

IDPet said:
The text on the top looks a bit chopped.
The sentences that starts with "listen here you insect" "did he just interrupt" and "I still can't believe" have the first letter with a different color.

The rest looks good.

you're an awful proofreader lmao, i just read the caption one last time and noticed how i messed up the whole image, right before i was going to post it

I never tried to make proofread because friends already help me with that on my things, I would commit a lot of mistakes too (because english isn't my native language), so I tried to help you with the rest of elements xD.

TheMadPrince

12/31/22 04:02PM

jigiyak said:

IDPet said:
The text on the top looks a bit chopped.
The sentences that starts with "listen here you insect" "did he just interrupt" and "I still can't believe" have the first letter with a different color.

The rest looks good.

you're an awful proofreader lmao, i just read the caption one last time and noticed how i messed up the whole image, right before i was going to post it

I think a "thank you" would be more appropriate for IDPet's contributions here, but maybe that's just me.

bullet

01/02/23 04:37AM

jigiyak said:
not quite the criticism i was expecting but okay, i was wanting something more like writing criticism but sure... i guess

You need to get in the habit of using punctuation. There's a lot of sentences, questions, and places where pauses are implied that don't have proper signifying marks.