3d absurdres blue_eyes brown_hair comic custom_maid_3d_2 dialogue female_only femsub kamen_writer_mc mc_trap_town natsume_(mc_trap_town) tagme text unaware xlmpth

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teso
>> #429595
Posted on 2021-07-20 19:30:55
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I'm more indifferent on the human furniture concept but cumming to deepen conditioning is something I always love.

Musna
>> #429606
Posted on 2021-07-20 22:06:55
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excellent work. Human furtniture it's always very good

L12@
>> #429647
Posted on 2021-07-21 06:01:24
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Great stuff, so what's next?

Xlmpth
>> #429651
Posted on 2021-07-21 07:05:20
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L12@ said:
Great stuff, so what's next?


Etta (afternoon) Day 2. We are getting excruciatingly close to day 3, where I can finally make an original Rina chapter. Only 4-5 chapters until then.

L12@
>> #429653
Posted on 2021-07-21 07:57:37
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Xlmpth said:
Etta (afternoon) Day 2. We are getting excruciatingly close to day 3, where I can finally make an original Rina chapter. Only 4-5 chapters until then.


Will each day have an evening event like Day 1, and you said this story will have 14 days?

Xlmpth
>> #430085
Posted on 2021-07-24 11:14:28
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L12@ said:
Will each day have an evening event like Day 1, and you said this story will have 14 days?


Each day will have at least 2 periods of time featuring one of the main cast, usually consisting of Daytime and Afternoon/Evening. Night period should appear often.

As for the 14 days, that was initially true for the first iterations of the story; however, I found that the story greatly improved by not constraining myself to a stretched out period of time. Originally, I created many concepts of chapters believing that the 14 days was neccesary for certain plot elements, but I realised it was unnecessary as the story evolved.

As such, the estimated number of days is approaching 7 instead, but it should prevent the events from feeling drawn out.

Also, 14 days is going to take years of chapter production with the rate I'm going.

Switch69
>> #430117
Posted on 2021-07-24 17:24:04
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Amazing work like always i love seeing suggestion deepening. Keep it up (^_^)

L12@
>> #433184
Posted on 2021-08-16 09:18:29
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Xlmpth said:
Each day will have at least 2 periods of time featuring one of the main cast, usually consisting of Daytime and Afternoon/Evening. Night period should appear often.

As for the 14 days, that was initially true for the first iterations of the story; however, I found that the story greatly improved by not constraining myself to a stretched out period of time. Originally, I created many concepts of chapters believing that the 14 days was neccesary for certain plot elements, but I realised it was unnecessary as the story evolved.

As such, the estimated number of days is approaching 7 instead, but it should prevent the events from feeling drawn out.

Also, 14 days is going to take years of chapter production with the rate I'm going.



Cool, how close to completion are you for the next part?

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