24 hours after being captured
paralyzed...
This...monster, has injected something into me...I can't move
No-I can't lose control
I can't succumb to panic
they will find me, the boys...they must be searching for me
And when they come and see this damn thing
They will kill it...
I just need to...resist...
I would swear I hear him talking to me...
But I can't really understand him
>> #34080
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I'm sorry the English reading community was so rude to you, but I hope you know we aren't all like that.
Grammar aside, I really like your brand of mind control and am super happy for another story from you to read ^.^
>> #34083
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GRIMSEST! I loved your previous works (Love Doll & Music for Sarah), as those were the only English ones I could read.
I'm sorry the English reading community was so rude to you, but I hope you know we aren't all like that.
Grammar aside, I really like your brand of mind control and am super happy for another story from you to read ^.^
Man, im not going to lie, your coment just made me very very happy, I was starting to think that translating this was a waste of time
THANKS A LOT for proving me wrong, I will try to do more content, and who knows, maybe when I finish schwan and I get some free time I can maybe translate it to english, thanks again for the support man I appreciate it great deal! (also my devianart is in the image, feel free to come by ^^)
>> #34088
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HOLY SHIT! That's one of my favorite comics on there. I was constentlu checking back for the next page to be translated!
Only wish the ending has a bit more closure as in a "were are they now" type thing as idk what all happened with he characters after they left.
>> #34091
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Wait you're the same guy that did love doll on ehentai?
HOLY SHIT! That's one of my favorite comics on there. I was constentlu checking back for the next page to be translated!
Only wish the ending has a bit more closure as in a "were are they now" type thing as idk what all happened with he characters after they left.
hi! and yeah I know about the ending, in the end I did it in a rushed way cause I was sure that an ending explaining where the characters were and what they were doing would take a lot, and the chapter would end up being really really long, but in the end its my mistake, so yeah :S
when im done with my actual proyect I think maybe I will go back to Love Doll and so some more things with it, I think the world can be a explored a little more, but to translate it to english I will require some help, anyway, for now, THANKS A LOT FOR COMENTING! holly crap! I love to see fans of my work ^^
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but to translate it to english I will require some help, anyway, for now,
*sigh*
ok, ok. I will help you again ¬¬
>> #34454
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As long as you keep it in the present tense, and possibly the preterite, and only use highschool vocabulary, I can read it just fine. XD
It's been like a decade since I've spoken or read any amount of Spanish, but I'm surprised by how much I can remember from just doing spanish classes in high school for two years.
Although, if you were to hear me try to speak spanish, I'm sure I'd sound like a cross between an inbred hillbilly and a demonic baby. I just don't have enough words to express myself without verbal contortions. Like "when I was have myself eleven, I wear metal teeth baskets" Trying to say I had braces when I was eleven.