Posted on 2024-05-23 18:09:27
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It's kind of late to announce it, because I've already been inactive for weeks, but I'm taking a break due to some writer's block. Whenever I come back to this, the next story you see from me will probably be one of these two ideas:

One is set in Clavi's medieval fantasy land, about a clueless knight bumbling his way into having control of a dragon. The dragon is the smart one and the strong one and the cool one of the pair, so she has to drag her incompetent master through his own mind control adventure.

The other one is basically a hypno themed zombie apocalypse with Kathy and co. The harem get stuck in a trance where all they're left with is adoration for their Master, who'd need to hide from them so as not to be relentlessly fucked to death.

But that preview aside, I'm going to be taking a break for a while longer, so don't expect to start seeing either of them just yet. For the zombie apocalypse one, I'm having trouble thinking of a story justification for the zombie trance, so I'd wwelcome any suggestions anyone has.

Posted on 2024-05-23 19:33:23
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Always a fan of the green pill, but yea this is just, great. Love the writing and the image of having all of the pills on the table really adds to it.

Anyways im a huge fan of the medieval idea, it rings close to home as it was a similar idea of a hypno story I once had, (except it wasnt a dragon but a magical but very competant succubus) but it was ultimately scrapped because I couldnt think of anything beyond that. So I would love to it brought to life... and I do love dragons.

Never was a big fan of the zombie aeshetic though but dont let my opinion sway on what you want to do next, if at all. Have fun with your break.

Posted on 2024-05-23 19:35:17
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Well, that's a shame, but good that you're forward about this.
And good luck with the writer's block. (and, like, happens to the best of us)
As for the zombie trance, I think some brainwashing machine or contingency trigger going haywire and doing a full override could be a reasonable catalyst.

Posted on 2024-05-23 21:38:08
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@Latios Agreed, about the green one. My favorite type of mind control by far. A slave who's so deeply in their owner's pocket that they can be trusted with their autonomy back is much more exciting than a slave who's only obedient because they're under some kind of active control. Glad you like the dragon story idea, and interesting to hear about your scrapped one too. About not being a fan of the 'zombie aesthetic', me neither. I just used it as a shorthand, but the way I actually intend to portray the trance is less zombie-like and more like a Black Friday crowd if their Master was a 80% off discount.

@Flesh I like the 'contingency trigger going haywire' suggestion, I might go with that. Something lying dormant in all of them already, so it can spread from member to member just by hearing the trigger phrase.

Posted on 2024-05-23 22:13:31
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Honestly the zombie thing could work if you have one of the new slaves being technically inclined and wanting to make a modification to the brainwashing booth to attempt to give it range to try to reclaim any other harem outposts and it would be able to get them before they could alert any one else there. Then while testing it there was a some kind of glitch or the file they're using gets corrupted which causes it to emit the zombie programming.

Posted on 2024-05-29 14:47:49
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Hey, wait a minute! This experiment isn't double blind *or* randomized! What kind of clinical trial is this?

Posted on 2024-06-01 06:47:40
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Made an account just to post this comment, I have to say your dragon character is awesome and amazingly written, the idea of true benevolent hypnosis/mind control is a concept Ive fallen in love with and youve really nailed it with Clavi!