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Posted on 2024-08-23 22:05:27
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I took a *little* more artistic liberty than usual when translating this. In the original text, Mash describes the new master in a more ambiguous tone(the norm for Japanese, but not quite to this extent), that would sound like an insult out of context. Saying his perversion and sex drive are his 'only redeeming features', and stuff like that.

Translating that and making it clear the brainwashed Mash is into that sort of thing now, at the same time, would have required a whole another paragraph and tiny text to fit it all. Instead, I opted to make it more obvious and lean into the common sense alteration that was already there.

Just figured I'd let you know there was a compromise. Hope it doesn't take away from it!
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