Posted on 2024-08-26 01:46:57
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I very rarely write dialogue since it gets bloated quickly, and I like to focus on the subs experience and reactions... but making maam her trigger word was too fun to pass up.

Posted on 2024-08-26 02:32:27
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Speaking as someone who frequently dialogue bloats... learning how to keep it concise and to the point without being boring takes practice.

Posted on 2024-08-26 02:43:57
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You did a really nice job on this one though!

Posted on 2024-08-26 10:22:08
Score: 2 (vote Up)

I mean writing captions, ain't easy. But full disclosure I think you've got the best ones I've seen in a long time

Posted on 2024-08-26 21:07:38
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Office lady Cynthia heck ya~~~