Looking for some writing advice
Hey fellas!
I'm out to get some advice on writing erotic fiction - I've written my fair share of literature before (of varying quality, of course :P), and recently I've had an idea for some erotica I can't quite get unstuck. A couple of days ago I started hammering out the basics and the scenes I can picture the best, and so far I think it's kind of alright.
However, this is my first time writing anything remotely sexy. I'm not sure what goes, what works, what doesn't, what I need to flesh out and what I can skip over. Basically, I'd like some tips and tricks from those of you who have written erotica before pertaining to the aforementioned points, as well as anything you think is worth mentioning.
The story so far is written in Twine 2 (www.twinery.org), a wonderful piece of software for creating nonlinear (Choose Your Own Adventure) stories. It ends up being a lot like Corruption of Champions if you put some work into it. I personally adore MC stores in that format - being able to really put yourself into the action is a major turn on x)
If it affects anything, the major themes are MC (of course), transformation, and memetic control.
So, to summarize - CHYOOA story in the pipe, first time writing sexytimes, not first time writing literature. Want advice to make it at least somewhat wank-worthy and not limp-dicked suckery.
I'm out to get some advice on writing erotic fiction - I've written my fair share of literature before (of varying quality, of course :P), and recently I've had an idea for some erotica I can't quite get unstuck. A couple of days ago I started hammering out the basics and the scenes I can picture the best, and so far I think it's kind of alright.
However, this is my first time writing anything remotely sexy. I'm not sure what goes, what works, what doesn't, what I need to flesh out and what I can skip over. Basically, I'd like some tips and tricks from those of you who have written erotica before pertaining to the aforementioned points, as well as anything you think is worth mentioning.
The story so far is written in Twine 2 (www.twinery.org), a wonderful piece of software for creating nonlinear (Choose Your Own Adventure) stories. It ends up being a lot like Corruption of Champions if you put some work into it. I personally adore MC stores in that format - being able to really put yourself into the action is a major turn on x)
If it affects anything, the major themes are MC (of course), transformation, and memetic control.
So, to summarize - CHYOOA story in the pipe, first time writing sexytimes, not first time writing literature. Want advice to make it at least somewhat wank-worthy and not limp-dicked suckery.