How should i improve this?
Hey guys so awhile back on DA i posted a journal entry asking people what video game character they would like to see me ATTEMPT to draw being hypnotized (keyword attempt because the majority of them were horrible drawings,) However there was one drawing that came out to be at least decent quality and that was a drawing i did based off of the Kaa and Shanti scene from Jungle Book 2 and that drawing was Lilly from the SNES game Illusion of Gaia ( one of my favorite games from my childhood actually) being hypnotized by Kaa and recently i've decided to redraw it digitally and cellshade it if you want to see the original drawing i did here it is below warning its bad lol:
amaturemanga.deviantart.c...llusion-of-Gaia-532625524
so what i want to ask you guys is that here is a preview of what the redraw with partial cellshading currently looks like i just need to apply the blur to blend the shade colors and add a glow effect to the eyes and its done but what i want to know is if there's anything you guys feel i should fix or improve on before i finish up the cell shading and post it. So here's the preview:
amaturemanga.deviantart.c...Project-Preview-636796500
amaturemanga.deviantart.c...llusion-of-Gaia-532625524
so what i want to ask you guys is that here is a preview of what the redraw with partial cellshading currently looks like i just need to apply the blur to blend the shade colors and add a glow effect to the eyes and its done but what i want to know is if there's anything you guys feel i should fix or improve on before i finish up the cell shading and post it. So here's the preview:
amaturemanga.deviantart.c...Project-Preview-636796500