Story Feed Back and Critiquing
Hello all. I posted this in the Story thread but I don't feel like it's getting enough attention there. If it's not too much trouble I'm just going to post it here too that I'm looking for people to critique my story. I'm only looking for a small amount of people so if you're interested please contact me via D-mail. and I'll set you up with a link to the download. I'l let people know when I have enough before I delete this thread.
Edit: I've decided to just post it <<saimin.booru.org/index.ph...ew&id=12&pid=0#17|here>>. If you feel like giving a critique please comment in either this thread or the thread that the story is posted in... or both.... which ever suits your fancy.
Edit: I've decided to just post it <<saimin.booru.org/index.ph...ew&id=12&pid=0#17|here>>. If you feel like giving a critique please comment in either this thread or the thread that the story is posted in... or both.... which ever suits your fancy.