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- Id: 50808
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Posted: 2017-06-20 14:09:44
by Dakuyami - Size: 852x443
- Source: www.pixiv.net/member_illu...um&illust_id=58173038
- Rating: Questionable
- Score: 206 (vote up)
>> #182962
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Anyway, I hope you enjoy! ^-^
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>> #182968
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I worked with HWD and Frombeyond before and I'm always happy when there is an opportunity for more good content on the hub.
DM me if you're interested ^^
>> #182976
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That said, you may want to ask someone to proof read your text. While not atrocious, by any means, at one point you do have the wrong your/you're. Also one or two of those ellipsis probably should have been commas instead... But again, I enjoyed it regardless. Thank you for the content!
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>> #182992
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And That Typo will bother me for all eternity~
You have the power to fix it, you know :-P
But yeah, typos aside this is a really good first go - though I'd suggest maybe sticking to one sentence per line for readability.
>> #183001
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Welcome and I want more!
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