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Bult
>> #294415
Posted on 2018-12-14 03:09:32
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There is a story apparently involving MC if anyone questions the validity of that.
RedCollarBlackCollar
>> #294418
Posted on 2018-12-14 03:13:07
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Bult said:
There is a story apparently involving MC if anyone questions the validity of that.


Please remember to tag the artist.
And while the MC may fit, I’m kind of iffy on the quality...
Bult
>> #294421
Posted on 2018-12-14 03:26:46
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
Please remember to tag the artist.
And while the MC may fit, I’m kind of iffy on the quality...



Sorry just kinda new to this, reposting for a friend of mine. Is it the shitty background that is the quality problem or is it the drawing as a whole.?
RedCollarBlackCollar
>> #294422
Posted on 2018-12-14 03:38:11
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Bult said:
Sorry just kinda new to this, reposting for a friend of mine. Is it the shitty background that is the quality problem or is it the drawing as a whole.?


As a whole could use some work.
Bult
>> #294423
Posted on 2018-12-14 03:44:55
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
As a whole could use some work.


I can delete it if you want?
RedCollarBlackCollar
>> #294424
Posted on 2018-12-14 03:47:18
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Bult said:
I can delete it if you want?


Your call. I’m not really goinf to call shots over it.
It would be nice to see the artist improve, though that’s ultimately up to them.
godzillahomer
>> #294425
Posted on 2018-12-14 03:54:16
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
Your call. I’m not really goinf to call shots over it.
It would be nice to see the artist improve, though that’s ultimately up to them.


well, let's help them, what do you think are the worse bits of it? it'll give the artist a clear area where they need improvement
RedCollarBlackCollar
>> #294433
Posted on 2018-12-14 04:22:20
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godzillahomer said:
well, let's help them, what do you think are the worse bits of it? it'll give the artist a clear area where they need improvement



Background doesn’t need to be fully rendered, but the way it’s been handled here is distracting and doesn’t compliment the character at all. Like I can’t tell where she is nor what exactly she’s standing on with there being a bit of a warped perspective.

The coloring of the character in general clashes with the black line art. Cause it looks like the coloring is trying to render part of the image, but the line art takes away from it in regards to thickness and application in some areas.

The posing is stiff and awkward, and the anatomy looks kind of off, particularly in the right leg. Like the way it’s turned looks like a total side view of the leg rather than it being a bit inward.

Lastly, the armor, shield and sword all feel incredibly flat. They don’t give me a sense of perspective the way they’re being held and worn, which makes them look slapped directly onto the character.


This is one of those things where even if I do give criticism, I typically will recommend looking up references to really help. It may not always be so helpful, but it really is at the end of the day.
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