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TheOneInControl
>> #316936
Posted on 2019-05-03 09:36:21
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Natsuki seems to have borrowed from Monika... fun! She's starting to play around with the power of hypnosis, so expect my favorite "super orgasm" to come soon. Maybe I'll make a Monika manip soon as well.

Tell me what you think!
theon111
>> #316944
Posted on 2019-05-03 11:16:34
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I think your text formatting and layout proofreading could use some work. You’ve got text at different font sizes, different centering within a column, and literally getting cut off by the bottom of the image.
Writing’s good, though.
animelover489
>> #316949
Posted on 2019-05-03 14:16:25
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It's excellent, but damn that blur effect :/ (at least Natsuji's pretty clear)
Moving past that, now I just want to see them kiss if that's a option for you?
Lastly more just a trivial thing, were Yuri's nails always painted? It's fine with me but was just wondering
COINCIDENCE?
>> #316953
Posted on 2019-05-03 14:30:01
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-Please put on your 3D glasses to view this image-
TheOneInControl
>> #316959
Posted on 2019-05-03 16:16:20
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theon111 said:
I think your text formatting and layout proofreading could use some work. You’ve got text at different font sizes, different centering within a column, and literally getting cut off by the bottom of the image.
Writing’s good, though.


Most of that is due to me trying to fit everything on the page. Deeply sorry.

animelover489 said:
It's excellent, but damn that blur effect :/ (at least Natsuji's pretty clear)
Moving past that, now I just want to see them kiss if that's a option for you?
Lastly more just a trivial thing, were Yuri's nails always painted? It's fine with me but was just wondering


I tried to get it so that only Yuri was glitched, as to make it look like only she was under control. Sorry.
Hmmm, a Natsuyuri kiss... hmm, that's gonna be difficult, but I could probably find something sorry if I can't though.
Canonically she painted them between the first hypno and the previous episode (actually it was just the artist's choice, but now there's an explanation)
COINCIDENCE? said:
-Please put on your 3D glasses to view this image-


Well, it's like watching a movie in 3D! It's an improvement honestly
animelover489
>> #317001
Posted on 2019-05-04 01:52:29
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Thanks for making at least Natsuki clear this time. You should try your hand at original drawings sometime though, you might be good at it
TheOneInControl
>> #317085
Posted on 2019-05-04 07:44:55
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animelover489 said:
Thanks for making at least Natsuki clear this time. You should try your hand at original drawings sometime though, you might be good at it


No I don't think I will.
My drawings are bad when girls have their clothes on. Imagine them off.
Rhymetimeguy said:
Ohhhhhhh, so that's what that is.


It just kinda worked out for me! Natsuki was set to far to the right for my glitch effect to reach.
It's great when coincidences coincide
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