Posted on 2019-07-10 01:02:41
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The next part includes urination; however, the current hard translation I am now doing my finishing edit with excludes it (though I do have the hard translation of the part in question done. I am thorough if nothing else.)

Is there anyone who wants me to put it back in, or keep it out when I do the next upload of my translation?

Posted on 2019-07-11 01:44:54
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I'll interpret the silence as:
Do not care

Okay, so no change needed.

Posted on 2019-07-11 12:21:49
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Hi I just started checking out this translation so I didn’t see this until now, but if anything if rather have the urination part included. Just cause I’m a full story kind of guy. But if you don’t include it that fine too.

Posted on 2019-07-11 23:44:44
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Well, welcome to the pool then.

I find it doesn't really add anything to the story, so unless it is a particular kink for you - it isn't really necessary.

As far as I can tell, it's more about the humiliation - humiliation which (in the story) can't be felt or experienced by the character involved. So the humiliation is more about the reader feeling it in place of the character. But, as far as I know, urination and such things are only really considered actively shameful in Japan (where toilets include such things as background music to mask the sound of someone using said toilet) - most other culture find urination disgusting (not exactly something to be ashamed of, but not something to do in public either.)
So really, the point of the urination scene is to showcase just how hypnotized and manipulated the character is - which I feel is adequately proven not to much later in the series - and not really something that those outside of Japan will understand intuitively.

Posted on 2019-07-12 09:20:48
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Oh I see, well thanks anyway for the information. That actually helps to see things from a different perspective for a change.

Posted on 2019-07-19 13:51:58
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It happens to be a particular kink of mine, so I would love to see the translation or have a link to the source, if possible. Thanks!

Posted on 2019-07-19 19:07:59
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